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Twilight and Rainbow Dash decide to enjoy a quiet, romantic date before Nightmare Night, little do they know, their Nightmare Night will be starting early.

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Pretty good! I hope you stay dedicated it, this could turn out pretty awesome!

Those tags though... I don't like those tags... You have a habit of killing Rainbow too.....

5203087
Welp. Now I think I'm gonna wait to read this fic till it's finished so that someone can tell me if Twilight and Rainbow live happily ever after or not.

Seems like a horror fic.
I don't like TwiDash, but I'll do a exception

5203150 Well, it IS tragedy, so 100% happy ending is out of the window.

5203150 Agreed. Not a fan of either of two of my favourite ponies dying,

5203087 This is my first try at a horror story, I hope it goes well. I don't always kill her, sometimes I let her body stick around... sort of

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You and I have that in common. They are both best pony and I can't stand it when they die. That's why I have a story about Twilight beating all the odds and finding a way to bring Rainbow back from death that makes sense and isn't dark and gritty.

5204095 Twilight and Rainbow are my favorite ponies and my favorite ship, I love them, but things are never easy in my stories. I've put the two of them on the brink of death plenty of times, sometimes they get through, other times, not so lucky. What's your story called? I would like to read it.

Horror story? From maxxxxx? Into the read later you go... (I do not have a lot of time on my hands so I'll read it when I get the chance...)

5204095 Reeaally?! I've been reading TwiDash stories for almost two years now, and I somehow missed yours. Time to go explore your story section!

5204109 And that's not in any way bad; in fact, it would be unrealistic if they always made it through in the end. However, some people handle a favourite character dying better than others. I have read a couple stories where one of them die and it was handled (in the story) well, but I tend to shy away from them.

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Remembrance. You can just look on my profile page, I only have a few stories so it won't be hard to find. I'd link it here, but I'm currently at work on my mobile phone and it's not easy to do things like a link.

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Heh, that's more than likely, I'm not a big time writer. I hope you like what you find though.

5205127 I added it to my tracking list; I'll give what you have written a look in the next few days!

Lost in a forest? I imagine that would be an issue...for ponies without wings. And seeing as it is not the Everfree Forest, I doubt neither Twilight or Rainbow Dash have reason to worry.

It seems you found a way around the flight issue. And now I am wondering where Twilight went. A question: is Twilight an alicorn here or is she not?

You last updated last year. Are you going to continue?

6251395 all my stories are still ongoing and will be finished, I've been fighting seriously health problems long and hard for more than a year and a half and it's very hard for me to write in my condition. I will be updating again... if I get better

6252501 oh... now I feel bad for asking. If it's okay with you, may I inquire what these problems may be?

6252616 yeah, about a year and a half ago I got really sick, eating would put me in a lot of pain and if I ate too much I would vomit digested blood. I've dropped from like 135 pounds down to 100 pounds (and I'm 5 foot 10). The doctors have run a lot of tests but they never figured out what it is. Right now they're thinking it's a rare genetic disorder called Porphyria and something else on top of that...

6252693 Oooohhhh. I can see why you'd need to take a break from writing. If it makes you feel any better, I've got tons of bone spurs tall be needing to be surgically removed. Ones in my chest, ones in my leg, and another is in my middle finger. I also have a few bent ribs. I've also got sever scholeosis (yes, I spelled that wrong) and it's quite noticeable of a tilt in my body. To top it all off, I have a giant fear of hospitals and others using sharp objects near me. The worst part is I have to wait till after I'm an adult to have them removed due to fast growth during adolescents. Meaning I've got to pay the bills. I really sucks but I honestly don't know what could be worse, not being able to eat without being in pain, or not being able to walk, sit, or use my hands for a few weeks. What is worse is being at Rochelle. The psychological torture I had been through there is enough to give me nightmares, which are uncommon for me since I enjoy horror. Except for hospitals. Those are the worst possible place to be. Now I'm rambling aren't I? Crap! Well, hope they can figure out how to make it so you can eat again without pain in your stomach.

This is the longest comment I've ever made anywhere.

6252798 Oh no, I didn't think you were rambling at all! I'm sorry you have to go through all of that :fluttershysad: . For me, hospitals are the only place I feel safe, I'm always worried about an intestinal perforation (essentially a hole bursting open in my intestines) if that were to happen where I live, an hour away from the hospital, I would likely die before I got there, but when they hospitalized me after I couldn't eat for a week, I was able to try new things because I was less afraid and I managed to find something that wasn't so hard on my stomach. Still, I don't envy your position either, I mean, except maybe the fact that you know what's wrong with you... not knowing sucks. I'm on a new treatment now, 4 days in and it seems like it's only making me worse, but it's a month long course of treatment so I'll just heave to deal with it and hope it works out.

6252825 you have my best wishes! Also, I feel like an intestinal perforation would hurt. A lot. Even with my high pain tolerance. The only hospital I mind being at is All Childrens and it's about 45 minutes to drive in good traffic. I don't have anything that's treating to my own life, so long as I don't fall back to into depression which I doubt will happen, but I can't say I couldn't potentially snap and go on a rampage. Basically, don't harm my friends if you value your life! :pinkiecrazy:

That's a joke, just to let you know. I may have mild schizophrenia and bipolar II but I doubt I'd ever kill someone. Knock their teeth out? Yeah. Cut you up into tiny pieces and cook you into cupcakes? Yeah, no. I hate the taste of chicken and supposedly that's what human taste like.

Incase you couldn't tell, I use dark humer to keep things happy. I don't know if it works for others, but it sure works for me! Now I know I'm rambling. Ugh! I've got to work on that...

Still, I've said this already, but I hope they can figure out what's up and get to fixing it. I hate how I just phrased that hut I can't thing of any other way to. If I was useful in the human anatomy, I'd try and help, but I'm strictly neurological since I puke at the sight of blood. Oddly enough, I like the taste of mine. It taste like copper. Wow, can I not stop this! Guh! Ya know what? I'm going to stop typing before I can't stop and break the site with a 10,000 word comment. Bye! Have a good night! And get well soon!:twilightsmile:

“I- I don't know, my wing really hurts...” She tried to slowly flex out her wing, stretching it gingerly until it was half extended and the pain again shot through her. An involuntary gasp escaped her lips and her legs went weak as she slowly retracted her wing. Rainbow was left huffing for breath as the searing dulled to an ache until her wing was folded back to her side.

Oh, damn. Her wing is locked up. I know how much it hurts since my leg locks up sometimes. 3 hours of pain. It sucks. Then again, it could've been worse. My mom's leg locked up for 3 days once.

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