First and all i got to say is they should of asked zecora if the gel is sble to hold off that much... becuase the story said they felt it preventing it from going to deep but at the end they did not they just felt it enter... if it was to much then they all may want to worry...
I agree with BBB but I think Sweetie Belle was lucky that she isn't pregnant becaus I bon't remember she used any protection when she lost her virgin either while Applebloom used pregnancy control pill.
It's good to know even the pearants can have their fun too.
"*Author Note: Before anyone reads this chapter I just want everyone to know I took no pleasure in typing this, I only did it for the main plot of the story. So, if I offend or disturb any of you, I apologize most sincerely.*" Reads note, thinks "oh no, who is going to die, is someone getting raped/killed/tortured?"
Reads story, thinks "yea, sure, took no pleasure, sure."
Something tells me that that note up there is a bit of a lie...
1110630 I was like "Aw, horseapples! Is somepony gonna be pissed with the other 2 Crusaders?" Then, I read it and thought, "Sweet Celestia of Equestria! Did you cream your pants while writing this!?!"
First and all i got to say is they should of asked zecora if the gel is sble to hold off that much... becuase the story said they felt it preventing it from going to deep but at the end they did not they just felt it enter... if it was to much then they all may want to worry...
Wow...good job! though the grammar and spelling could be a little better. Still good job!
I agree with BBB but I think Sweetie Belle was lucky that she isn't pregnant becaus I bon't remember she used any protection when she lost her virgin either while Applebloom used pregnancy control pill.
It's good to know even the pearants can have their fun too.
hey if you need or want a proof reader then i'd be more than happy to.
"*Author Note: Before anyone reads this chapter I just want everyone to know I took no pleasure in typing this, I only did it for the main plot of the story. So, if I offend or disturb any of you, I apologize most sincerely.*"
Reads note, thinks "oh no, who is going to die, is someone getting raped/killed/tortured?"
Reads story, thinks "yea, sure, took no pleasure, sure."
Something tells me that that note up there is a bit of a lie...
I KNEW THERE WOULD BE AN ORGY.
1110630 I was like "Aw, horseapples! Is somepony gonna be pissed with the other 2 Crusaders?" Then, I read it and thought, "Sweet Celestia of Equestria! Did you cream your pants while writing this!?!"