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gcwg57


I am known by many names: Griffly, Haggis, The Vulcan, That Socially Awkward Yet Extroverted Otaku Guy, but you... You may call me... Gicwig.

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A series of poems about the villains of MLP. They are all sonnets, because I like sonnets. Oh, and I usually like to play around with the rhyme schemes.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 25 )

Very well made, the note on Tirek about 'evil working alone' was especially chilling.

5332226 Thank you, any specific thoughts?

5332262 Okay. Each to their own.

To be honest, I do not like poems to much.
The ones you wrote are fine, I guess, thought the Chrysalis one's seems worse than first two.


Demonic Rebellion (Part 1) didn't seems to good as well. I marked the part that seemed odd.

Awkward encounters mean acceptance denied
A common factor provides new ways of seeing
Six friends come together and make amends

5335217 What seems odd about it?
Also, oddly enough, I wrote the first 3 awhile back and basically everyone that read them said that Chrysalis was the best out of the 3.

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I dunno, personal preference I quess. I just like two first more.

Given how stubborn a Twilight was at not accepting the pinkie sense who had GROWN UP WITH MAGIC AROUND HER, I dread to think about a Twilight who comes in with the prejudice that magic is just a excuse for things unanswered, rather than simply a ANOTHER set of rules to learn and understand.

5362585 Wow, hadn't thought of that. That's going to be interesting. On another note, Did you like the poems?

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Sadly I don't have the talent for poetry.

5364516 I'm sure you make up for that somewhere else, but you didn't answer the question. Did you like them?

The ending was cheesey and I liked it:rainbowlaugh:

Beautiful....we love you luna :applecry:

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Thank you, I'm glad that you liked them. Which poem was your favorite?

Poetry is nowhere near as popular in fanfiction as it should be. I´ll give this a look later!

7177369 I look forward to hearing your thoughts after you read it. Out of all my Fimfiction works this is the one I'm most proud of and I'm glad others see peotry as something we need more of.

I don´t know why, but this poem captures Discord´s personality pretty well :rainbowlaugh:

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Well, I´m not a poet nor know much about it, so I don´t believe I´ll be able to provide a detailed review on this series or even say if they work on a technical level.
However, I did enjoy them and in certain parts the creativity you used to describe several events was pretty interesting to see unfold. So I think this project was a success. Well done :twilightsmile:

7208885 Thanks that means a lot to me. Also, it's good to hear from people that don't have a background in the art.

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