Floret is a filly attending the Canterlot School for Gifted Unicorns. Every day, she tells the camellia flower she grew out of a seed as her entrance exam about her troubles and every day after the troubles are gone. A bully pushed down the stairs. A teacher getting sick. What is going on in the school and who is the pony dealing with Floret's enemies in lethal ways?
Submission for Weekly Contests story contest #14 botany and plants.
... well, I have to say, It's good... know what? I gonna do a review about this. what do you think?
5392853 I think go for it! I would love to see one.
5393311 okay then
That.. was disturbing.
5596831 Disturbing good or disturbing bad?
5597885 A little bit of both, I guess..
5599004 In what way?
5599265 Well, I usually don't like dark or gore stories, and it kinda ticked me off that there was little to no explanation on why the plant was evil. But nevertheless, it was a good story that I enjoyed reading.
5599442 Was the plant evil? Or was the plant helping Floret? In any case, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.
This story was very interesting! I'm glad I found it, however I did spot a few errors:
That should be me.
The comma should be moved to after Camellia.
That should be Viper Tongue's. I'd also suggest you add a mystery tag to better reflect the story.
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Thank you for reading! The edits you suggested have gone through, and I appreciate your taking the time to write them out.
Have a good one!
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Wow, old comment! And you’re welcome!