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Wait shouldn't he be in armor?
6122262 That comes later
I like it. Totally new twist on the Displaced idea. No, "confused person with powers goes to happy Equestria and is misunderstood". This is "person end up with powers, goes to terrible Equestria and fucks shit up". Pretty great. Also, nice call with Armata Strigoi.
Are you f***ing KIDDING ME??!!
So far, its pretty good. I'll keep reading this when you make another chapter.
Heh, Crystal cock
This is extremely creative. I mean, really. I especially love that he gets an army of his own. A lot of fics don't do that.
Is the story dead?
... This story has my curiosity. let us see how far it takes me down the rabbit hole...
You misspelled LIGHT-N-ING every single time in this paragraph and the ones after it.
LMAO
So... The princesses are doing rap?.
Cool I guess...
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but they outlawed rap in equestria
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This isn't Canada, you don't need to censor things twice
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Statement: Correct ally.
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Lawl.
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ooh, a story that has caught the curiosity of two reapers. that doesn't happen too often. we shall see how long it keeps our interest. few do for long.
no offense, but you definitely need someone to look over your story for mistakes. at one point you said mid morning but said sunset in the next statement then said the sun was rising above the mountains. yeah, you need to work on your timeframes and tenses. seems curious so far though.