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Mehrune's Razor kills anything with one hit, even if it's a scratch. Not for me in Skyrim.
I love this story. Because I HATE FALL OF EQUESTRIA.
This is awesome. Can't wait til he gets the armor and scares the s*** out of everything.
In terms of fucked up universes Fall of Equestria is up there with Your Human and You, The Conversion Bureau, and whatever that world is where it's exactly the same just replace the Caribou with Canterlot's "Elite".
"she seemed a little relived that I didn't attempt to rap her like the others..."
Forgot the e in rape. But you totally got me hooked now.
mehrune's razor, ah one of my favorite Derelic weapons
I left a like, not gonna read it, sorry bud, don't have the heart to be able to read stuff involving the Fall of Equestria universe, you got my blessings man, make the Caribou fuckers suffer.
Honestly, this being my first story to read on Fim.
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Holy shit, that was awesome.
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You don't even know the background to this wow
BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!
6205543 heh, mine too. I also really like the Ebony blade and the Wabbajack.
6415895 Mace of Molag Bal for me.
6415895 WABBAJACK! WABBAJACK! WABBAJACK!!!! *I summon the prince of madness*
6410080 SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE!
Uhhh... Mehrune's Razor has a insta-kill chance, not guarantee. Other than that, good job.
7162164 Welcome to equestria, where friendship is magic and rainbows can turn you to stone what's your point?
6410080 SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE!
(Did I get it right?)
*edit*
Well it appears I did and someone beat me to it. Aw well. Lol
7288595 its ok Mutiple cultists never hurt anyone .... well always hurt everyone what ever SOULS FOR THE SOULD KING BITCHES!!!!
It was at this point I couldn't read anymore.
I decided to give this fic a bigger chance than I usually do because I recently discovered Fall of Equestria and immediately began to hate it, but this is just bad. The narrative and dialogue is awkward, the spacing is just off and too wide for no real reason and I have no idea what you're trying to do and it is littered with grammatical mistakes just like this
Additionally, so far the protagonist is bland and uninteresting, and while the powers of a Daedric prince are interesting to have, they haven't added much of anything to the story other than assuring Mr. Bland Main Character doesn't instantly die.
It's a standard wish fulfillment human in Equestria story, but instead of going against one of the canon villains you targeted the Caribou to make this guy a hero. My recommendation? Give the main guy who is so bland I cannot remember his name despite reading this in sitting a character and get a competent editor. There are a lot of rookie mistakes here that a single proof reading session would fix.
I'll admit there is potential here for something interesting, but as it is I can't stand reading this anymore. Good luck, and if you rewrite this story I might give it another chance someday.
Well, I'm a little late to the party, but I got here to read so, let's see.
Here and there, some problems, grammar and such, probably already been worked out but hey, I ain't that big of a judge, the stories good, I don't mind the slaughter of a bunch of people cause where's the fun if there's no death? Am I right?
I won't lie, some cringe here and there, but honestly, not bad, I will read on and further delve myself into this story to see what else happens.
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Did... did nearly every hit of the Razor insta-kill? Lucky bastard
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yeah, you do that. i'll just be over here doing my thing. *swings scythe opening portals to hell from which demons emerge to drag the bastards to the special place set aside for them before sheathing my sword* hahahahahahaha.