I feel nothing; enjoyment is a myth, and happiness is fleeting. Every day is a struggle to find meaning and value in my actions.
Wraith team was the most elite of the elite. The Bravest of the Brave. And the unluckiest of the unlucky.
Brushing your teeth could turn out to be a terrorist attack.
Destroying Phantom bases could send you to a place filled with colorful talking ponies.
WAIT WHAT!
A/N Second Fanfiction ever so please be helpful with comments. Read on Fellow MLP lovers! Tom Clancy's ghost recon phantoms belongs to Tom Clancy (Rip Tom Clancy) And MLP:FIM belongs to Hasbro.
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Nice story, but needs some work (I.E. comma placement issues, some capitalization and some grammar problems.) I truly like it, there's not enough Ghost Recon stories on FiMFiction.
Well, what the hell do I know? I haven't even started a story yet, but read enough to know sentence structure, grammar and the like. Well, keep the story going and ask someone on the site to edit and proofread. Ask a friend as well.
5603942 Hey thanks for the review and I appreciate that you like my story. As for grammar and comma placement, Yeah i know but if your the writer you have a hard time writing down your thoughts and checking everything.
To anyone reading my story I am in need of a good editor, please pm to apply.
can't wait to see what u do next.
the story seems to be coming along great. once I read the next chapter I can give u some feed back. I try to get into a story before I criticize it.
YA! TAZE THAT BITCH! XD
I have no quarrel with them getting powers in fact! Give them powers and ignore others saying no!
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Hey thanks dude! Ill keep that in mind glad your reading my story!
Sounds like it will just keep becoming more fun as it goes so why not do as u please. At any rate I love the story and can't wait to read more.
5709754 Yep definitely give them some sort of powers
Yes. It needs a lot of work so yes revise it but take your time. Like me!
Gorilla.
6532204 Wow lol I wasn't even sure people even cared about my story :) thanks. Also yea I plan on re-writing it I just wanted to see what people thought.
Also I am still in need of an editor. My last one kinda bailed on me after he made the process of getting him the chapters so hard.
6532221 Anytime.
What's that bundle of stick's name? The editor I mean.
One more thing as of tomorrow, operation: re-write starts. Also even though I have decided I would still like you, the reader, to give me input.
6532238 Mikito, Although don't judge him hes already editing another story "Man o' war" or something its a really big story, and I am assuming that he had already figured out a system with that author and kinda forgot that I didn't know how to use google's file sharing thing or whatever it is.
6532264 Huh. I'm an editor for like 2 stories.
6532266 Would you be up for one more story?
6532309 Hmmmm. Nah. Maybe. Honestly I got enough with school and we'll I'm not really fit for it. Hilariously I haven't got a single chapter from any of the stories. One is in the process and the other... I think the guy is dead. No experience at all. Also I don't think I'm a good judge for stories. I might think about it. I'm tired. Gonna go to bed after I finish 1 chapter of a story. Nighty night ;P
6532323 kk nite. I myself am going to work on story boards. Hopefully not get caught by parents, and slay a dragon (not really). Also even though I need an editor I was only semi serious. So don't trouble you're self.
6532338 Me? Troubled? Mortal pahlease! You speak to a god! No bowing! I hate that shit. I mean it's not like I am a legit got of buttsex or anything. But even I enjoy sleeping... for EONS! Nothing better than waking up after A couple Millenia/Eons. THAT. Is the stuff. ESPECIALLY! If you have a nice warm goddess with you. Fire goddess are like really warm and sometimes (when they're not yelling at you *COUGH!* ALL THE TIME *COUGH!*) they can be pretty nice (as long as they don't drip lava on the carpet). But eh some cults don't shut the hell up and then they dun wake me up. And they dun fucked up. Wasn't much left of them afterwards.
SLEEP COME TO ME!
im okay with this...
rewrite? sure!
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New chapter up! Go read First Contact Pt. 1, it is the beginning of the rewrite.
So far so good
Why did you stop this? It seemed to bo pretty good.
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I don't stop I just got really busy I'm coming back to my stories soon
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Yay!