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Captain Unstoppable


"When you have eliminated the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth." Sherlock Holmes

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Hearts and Hooves Day is a time to appreciate that special somepony that makes your life complete, or in the case of Rainbow Dash completely forget. Can she find a gift in time for Mac who had already surprised her with gifts or did he ruin it all? Join in Dash's race to find the perfect gift for her coltfriend, or has the damage already been done?

Thank you to Jake the Army Guy,jszellmer, and Crowquill Symphony for the edits.

Credit for picture goes to horsefan999

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Love is like a box of donuts. Some are the yummy Bavarian cream-filled kind, some are the non-yummy jelly-filled kind and the rest are the in-between glazed kind.

Sweet story, Cap. :twilightsmile: Love is like a box of donuts; sometimes we don't know it, but it's exactly what we need. Happy Valentine's Day!

Actually, as I remember it, St Valentine was executed for marrying people during a period of European History where there was a serious war going on. The king at the time outlawed marriage in an attempt to swell the size of his armies.

Ah love is like a box of doughnuts...They're all for me and no-one else can have any! :rainbowlaugh:

All kidding aside, this was cute!

Keep on writing Cap! :pinkiehappy:

Psh, that'll teach you, Dash. Next time you have romance trouble, check in on Rarity, not Pinkie! :raritywink:

5635463 Five bits says that Rarity turns out to be even weirder. :raritywink:

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Well, obviously.
What, did you think I suggested that for Dash's benefit? Pft.

5638797 :rainbowderp: You knew I was there the whole time?

:raritywink: Of course I did, Darling. Do you think I'd leave the curtains open if I didn't want other ponies watching?

I thought the justification was he was marrying couples who weren't allowed t'be married?

D'aww! This was cute, I liked it.

I agree,it was cute but still I feel upset at dash for hiding the truth from him, you're supposed to tell each other everything in a relationship.

5945544 Can you explain your comment a bit more? It didn't make that much sense to me.

What I mean is that in a relationship, you are supposed to tell each other everything, it'll only damage your relationship if you lie about something or keep the truth from them(the only exception being a suprise party). Also autocorrect is being autocorrect again, I'm typing this on my phone.

5947871 Gotcha. I agree with you, but it's not supposed to be serious, just funny.

I got the reference.

8079837 Uh... what reference? I have read this story five times over and can't find what I might have done lol.

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The title is a play on the opening line from "Forrest Gump".

8080513 Oh God lol. If it was a snake it would have bit me

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