Mankind has finally reached the stars and is now attempting to reach other systems in the galaxy. What will happen when one man finds himself stuck, unable to return home, on a strange new world with talking ponies?
I can excuse the detail of them knowing each others' languages and just chock that up as something to do with the planet's natural magical field. But... how does he know the term 'alicorn'? Probably best to edit that.
Figured there'd be more reactions about the fact that he was an alien. Or the fact that they speak his language.(though, no doubt, the fact that they speak the same language is an unexpected bonus, I'm surprised he doesn't wonder how and why they speak the same language).
5645927 Well I was going with the idea that they see strange things all the time if ya think about the show, so they'd be more curious if anything. Also with the language thing, the human was on a mission to find possible life so he'd be less affected by things like that.
5645999 How would he be less effected by an alien species knowing his language? Doesn't make sense. Knowing they're sentient? Sure, he's trained for that. Knowing the same language without any explanation as to why? No, it doesn't.
As for the mane six... yeah, they likely would be quick to accept the alien bit. But, just not THAT quick, is what I mean. I mean, an ALIEN is sort of a huge deal. Sure, they'd be quicker to adapt than most, I'll give you that. But even then, that's a little TOO quick, is all.
5669823 That ship could have come from anywhere. Another country for example. And wouldn't aliens seem farfetched to most planets whom haven't confirmed such before?
To emphasize the point, he brought the screen to a diagnostics of his recently injured leg which showed that though it was mostly healed, the bone itself was still a little week and would take about another day to fully heal and strengthen.
“Twilight!” *SLAP* “Get a hold of yourself Twilight! I m-mean if thats okay with you….” After her little, assertive outburst, Fluttershy began to cower slightly out of embarrassment.
You might want to edit to have the 'hug' Twilight gives Celestia changed into a nuzzle. After all, they're ponies.
I can excuse the detail of them knowing each others' languages and just chock that up as something to do with the planet's natural magical field. But... how does he know the term 'alicorn'? Probably best to edit that.
Figured there'd be more reactions about the fact that he was an alien. Or the fact that they speak his language.(though, no doubt, the fact that they speak the same language is an unexpected bonus, I'm surprised he doesn't wonder how and why they speak the same language).
But, as a whole, and overall good chapter.^_^
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Well I was going with the idea that they see strange things all the time if ya think about the show, so they'd be more curious if anything. Also with the language thing, the human was on a mission to find possible life so he'd be less affected by things like that.
5645999 How would he be less effected by an alien species knowing his language? Doesn't make sense. Knowing they're sentient? Sure, he's trained for that. Knowing the same language without any explanation as to why? No, it doesn't.
As for the mane six... yeah, they likely would be quick to accept the alien bit. But, just not THAT quick, is what I mean. I mean, an ALIEN is sort of a huge deal. Sure, they'd be quicker to adapt than most, I'll give you that. But even then, that's a little TOO quick, is all.
5646280 trying to play nice to steal his tech perhaps?
5668622 They don't even know he's an alien at this point, so doubt it.
5669748 you would think that the ponies knew he was an ailen cus of the ship :p
5669823 That ship could have come from anywhere. Another country for example. And wouldn't aliens seem farfetched to most planets whom haven't confirmed such before?
5669956 well they are ponies.
5670528 Your point? To them, ponies are normal. Sure, they're not normal from OUR viewpoint, but you've got to consider THEIR viewpoint.
Weak, not week. Other than that, awesome job!
You tell 'er sista'