Thomas, a human, has appeared in the magical land of Equestria, though it is much different from the show. Ponies of this world are all anthros. What's more, Thomas has been assigned as Princess Luna's royal concubine.
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am liking this so far
6032651 Appreciated.
Pretty good start
At last, a New Human Harem story! There's been a surprising shortage of them as of late, and it's good to see at least one story sprout in these last few months.
6032733 Thank you.
6032753 Hopefully mine will be worth the wait.
Nice chapter. I didn't expect Celestia to have such varied tastes in bedmates or that concubines/prostitutes are an accepted job in Equestria. Hope to see more of this story and maybe a little bit of interaction between Thomas and some of the harem staff.
6033045 That's what I'm hoping for too.
6032857 ignore MythrilMoth, he's just a prick that thinks he runs this site
Nice worldbuilding, but it feels like the chapter ended abrupbtly
Looking good so far, can't wait to read more.
I know this is just the introduction of the world so far, I hope that the next chapters will have more worlds in them so that way the story will be more detailled and it will not look like it is something rushed.
Keep up the good work
Ps: I really like the shy personality of the main character.
6035154 Appreciated
6035366 Sadly, I agree. I'm still fairly new to this kind of story and this site, so I'm bound to stumble a bit in these first few tries.
6035551 Shy? Really? I would have said meek. Naturally he's a bit intimidated about being around large and sexy anthro ponies all day, especially the goddess with whom he shares a bed, but I think the last part does a lot to erase one's shyness.
6035637 Thanks
6035799 Thanks for the catch.
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This story remind of a artwork of a artist that goes by the name "BGN". Have you seen some of his artwork and the artist even gave the pic a backstory about a male human named Thomas(Wow, that is some coincidence that your main character having the same name that the artist also thought up) but the only differents from your story is in his the human becomes a Royal Guard and the mate of Prince Blueblood. You can find the pic on Derpibooru by searching these words "oc:Thomas,Prince blueblood" you will find the pic and here the backstory that artist wrote:
And with that out of the way so the anthro ponies looks like the pics of BGN?(you can find the ref I'm talking about by searching these words on derpibooru "flash sentry,artist:bgn,armor" you will find it and same about the Royal Guard's armor. Or you want I can just pm you the pics.
6038002 I imagine there is a fan approved standard for how pony anthros look. I'm looking at a few in the recommendations for similar stories right now. So I think it's safe to say everyone should know what these anthro ponies look like without much description.
6043472 As do I.
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So there gonna be other stories similar this story and maybe some base on BGN's artworks like this (to find the full version of it on Derpibooru)? Because I was waiting for a story that is base on his arts of anthro pones with feet not hooves. And I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of Celestia's harem. And if you want I can pm you some interesting stories ideas.
6045641 Um... seems like you're making a lot of assumptions. My anthro ponies aren't based on any particular artwork, but the general image I've seen from multiple artists. My anthros also have hooves, at least for the moment. If you'd like, send me a link to this guy and I'll check out his work. Also, I'm always open to suggestions.
This might answer the question!
I love this chapter.it was sweet and funny.
Alright never mind my thought from first chapter
6277874 Happy to help.
I... I see we skipped... well, all the formalities.
Ok then, let's skip all that lovey-mushy stuff (as Rainbow would say) and get straight to the 'good stuff'.
That's scarily tall.
Don't use slashes like this. Slashes are used when you don't know exactly what word to use. In stories, at least do something like "pony (or woman)", or even better, just say "woman". Brackets and slashes aren't really good for stories like this, unless it's from a unique perspective, like second/first person.
I've never seen something like this in a third-person fanfic. She said that to who?
Normally people say "She thought" or "She found".
HOWEVER....
That would be something violating 'show, don't tell'. Always show, not tell. Don't say that 'the couple loved each other', rather show it through their actions.
Men being used for their bodies, eh?
6439737 That's a loaded statement if I ever saw one...
So basically half the story was skipped. Not a fan.
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Eh, it gets better.
You good man If you need to talk about it am here dude
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Yeah, that probably could have been phrased better, but the story has survived worse, so I'll leave it be.