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I see great comedy potential with Discord or Pinkie Pie. Or it could be a horrific slaughterfest. Let's find out!

TIME TO FLAY SOME SCALPS!

I like this story. I think funnier than hell how he already wants to snap someone's neck.:rainbowlaugh: i wonder how he got like that.

6177606 Ok so you wake up with a voice in your head that wants all things dead, get trapped in stone for 1000+ years, and have to deal with discord for the years. Yea

Huh Is the inner Voice Going to get involved, Because even if this was a Cosplayer he could have the Inner voice or is this like Kriegs Earlier days when he was a actual psycho?

The shift in POV is a little jarring; if you want multiple perspectives I'd stay away from first person entirely. Celestia's explanation on Krieg's abilities felt a little heavy-hoofed as well.

I am probably going to read this solely for the fact this "inner voice" said "My stomach is clear and my mind is full of bacon!":rainbowlaugh:

6181015 It was more of a one time thing to explain his abilities.

6182777 missclick ment to respond to profpyro

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