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Uncle Smiles

Been getting a weird vibe lately. Disease, dispair and distrust. A sinister cloud of looming uncertainty.

Uncle Smiles Joined 20th Apr, 2015 · Offline

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DwarvishPony
DwarvishPony #2 · Jan 12th, 2017 · · · A Cold game of Golf (Edited) ·
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Honestly I'm surprised I haven't seen this crossover sooner.

I have a few small nitpicks. The first chapter feels unfinished. Like it's leading into something, but leaves us hanging in the wrong spot. There's also a few grammatical errors here and there. I'd recommend having someone give it a look over and point out the mistakes.

Overall though, I'm intrigued as to how you'll make this work. I'll keep an eye on this for now.

Uncle Smiles
Uncle Smiles #3 · Jan 12th, 2017 · · · A Cold game of Golf (Edited) ·
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7861987 The thing is that I really suck at starting a new fic. I tend to make the first chapters short while the second will be longer.

It's a thing I'm trying to stop doing but...

Anyway, I am currently working on extending it. The reason I posted it like it is now was because I wanted to see if people would actually be interested in reading. So expect some sort of update soon.

vaththecat
vaththecat #4 · Jan 13th, 2017 · · · A Cold game of Golf (Edited) ·
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Honestly I like Uncle Death. Hes not like any other grim reaper i known. Keep it up I want to know what happens next:rainbowlaugh:

Kind of Brony
Kind of Brony #6 · Jan 14th, 2017 · · · A Cold game of Golf (Edited) ·
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Still better than Uncle Grandpa.

Uncle Smiles
Uncle Smiles #8 · Jan 14th, 2017 · · · A Cold game of Golf (Edited) ·
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7866383 I've watched one episode of that LSD trip of a show. I'm not hating on the creators of that show, I just want to know what were they on?

The A I
The A I #10 · Jan 14th, 2017 · · · A Cold game of Golf (Edited) ·
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hehehe, i love this already

MaskofLimbo
MaskofLimbo #11 · Feb 11th, 2017 · · · A Cold game of Golf (Edited) ·
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Uncleeee! You around here? AWESOME!
Now, people cannot say that My Little Pony is poop, since the coolest uncle like it, too.
Awesome start and I'm hoping great things from this. ROCK ON, UNCLE!

Zen-Aku
Zen-Aku #14 · Apr 14th, 2017 · · · A Cold game of Golf (Edited) ·
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798036 dude you have GOT to continue this

Warbar
Warbar #20 · Oct 17th, 2017 · · · A Night out in the Woods ·
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Popcorn has claimed the lives of over little to no people. This is not a choki- I mean joking matter!

Rogue Shadow
Rogue Shadow #21 · Mar 22nd, 2018 · · · A Night out in the Woods ·
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Oooooohhhhh mysterious, please update soon!!:twilightsmile:. Also I keep thinking let it die the song, can't help it:scootangel:

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