"People do not decide to become extraordinary. They decide to accomplish extraordinary things" –Edmund Hillary (explorer)
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A famous explorer once said, "The extraordinary is in what we do, not who we are."
You want to know how I got my cutie mark?
I'd finally set out make my mark, to find adventure.
But instead, adventure found me. I was a blank flank well into my teenage years as a young explorer. Fresh from the academy and in search of lost relics, I journeyed to an island. Before anchoring at bay, the ship was cloven in two by an unforeseen storm leaving me separated from any other survivors and washed ashore.
In our darkest moments, when life flashes before us, we find something, something that keeps us going, someting that pushes us.
I had to endure both physical and emotional torture in order to survive the island. But when all seemed lost, I found a truth.
And I knew what I must become.
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I looking for a editor. Please contact me via PM if you are interested. BIG thanks to destinyfreedom.deviantart. Without him, this story would not even exist. Ideas, comment or suggestions can be written here or the PM.
Inspired by the new Tomb Raider perhaps?
i love it
i give you this pic as a thank you for your work
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dude awesome picture. its now my background
. oh and great story love anything with daring do
1151851 yep.
1151964 Thanks for reading this.
And lame that this fic is not on the hits now.
1152547 Thanks, i searched whole of the internet on this one. But it was WORTH it.
And 7 whole Fave in one night/day.
You ROCK!
Okay. This is an Insta-fave.
This is a great idea, greatly executed.
This story is good and you should feel good.
1156100 Thanks, I will do my best.
So is the editor job already taken? It's a promising story that I would love to be a part of.
1219002 Well, i need someone who has experiense. Anyway, thanks for the fave.
sorry for the short chapter. But I had some MAJOR writing block on this one. Any ideas to the next one will be taken into consideration, except *spoiler alert* kill the thugs. The time is not right on that one. *end of spoiler* I promise to have a larger chapter soon up, but this take time. I'm not a good writer. Anyway, big thanks to the following ups and all the kinds word. You ROCK!
Things finally got into the right place in my head. Writing block off(for now). Anyway, I need another editore
. Anyway, enjoy
again. It's feals like wilbeak not take his time off for this ficOh yes, the mountains in Wales gave me that feeling. Great story so far, now to read more.
A great story, my friend. As for helping you out I'm not sure what to do, but I'll think about it.
Hm, definitely has potential, but it does need some work. Mostly in that you use present tense words where you shouldn't.
I noticed that happened a lot in this chapter. I'll follow this to see where it goes.
2330550 I need serious an editor that can do his thing. Unfortunaly, those guys are hard to come by. Will try to do something about the errors you made highlighted, but it is difficult to see does without proper knowledge to English. And I have problems with exactly this things! No wounder why my English school character is so bad.