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Oh Essence you insane lady you. So far this peak my interest.
Poke.
Also, obligatory like because like... And I helped out... XD
A world of Displaced who conquered Earth... now that caught my interest.
Also, David(The Doctor) is not included in her list, nor any of his Universe's Displaced.
Damn... Well, I know Jack Frost most likely isn't included, seeing as how new he is to the Displaced thing. He may have lived for 10 thousand years but only recently found out about Displaced. Blood Cleaver... She's been Displaced by herself a little over 2 years and didn't get a single token until she left her home universe. She did however have her own token before that and could have been called. (It is very rare for her to be called for some reason, maybe her token is broken?)
Honestly, sure no time passes during travel, but time certainly passes at both points of the trip. Hence the accepted point of time line shenanigans being common to all Displaced. Any way, seems Alex is the active crossover character while Alice is the passive crossover character.
OUAT Rumpelstiltskin is a creepy dude before the switch to Maybrook (or is it view?), afterwards he became a creepy old dude. The wheeler dealer of the land of fiction, trapped by a deal. You know, the only one of its nature I recall being used was a deal about first borns. Fate and time are literally at his beck and call so long as he makes a deal. You could make a first born deal while lacking a uterus due to injury and you would still carry to term. Because he is just that strong in terms of deals, and contract magic.
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Well, basically any Rumple. So yes?
A Novakid in Equestria with Fallout tech set in the pre-war state.
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...Kind of.
I'm tempting to ask for a crossover. This story is getting interesting.
You may want to find the actual link because it sent me to just youtube. Unless it was suppose to do that, then ignore me!
“It’s time to win, time for me to take back my home!”
By the way, if Alex fuse with another Alex I expect something like this. Especially the last one.
... You want to know something funny? This story gets more confusing with each new chapter.
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*shrug*
The youtube link didn't work for me.
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Just dramatic music.
Oh boy...
Ok i like the idea bugs there are a number of things that bug me.
1. I like the idea of him being very Sour and Prudent to everyone around him. But the reasoning behind why is annoying and needless. With the Displaced taking earth it could have been for any other reason and i think it would make more sense.
2. While some stories i know that can have Two different stories happening with different characters. I honestly think it should have been just Alex. Doesn't need to be told with another person and doing it like this makes the audience less caring to what's happening. Also tends to just become a big mess of stuff happening.
3. Then there's the technology you have in Alex's world. It may just be me but i think it would have been better with if its like the show with the only difference being a backstory that Alex had in Equestria. So have him been around a Thousand or so years ago and then go from there just creating it be more interesting and entertaining to the Audience.
4. I also like the idea of Him being something really big and amazing making him a Star is something i like. I imagine the only one who could match his power would be Discord.
5. If this is has to be a Displaced story. Have it be from normal means and not have some powerful person helping.
6. Don't have the world of Mlp be on Earth. Having it like that ruins so many opportunities. Just imagine the fun it could have with him going back to earth at one point with him being a girl. Him not being used to to being called one.
There are a some things for example. some of the jokes you have i find really funny so far. With who i'm assuming is gonna be Eris. Saying stuff like him being her mom and what not. That i found really funny .
Also Side note it would be funny if Discord did something and Alex is actually her mom. Just funny and got to admit i want to see that. Also Discord/Alex romance lol
But i do like it. Has potential and its very entertaining with the jokes. I wouldn't mind a remake of this. But yeah just my initial thoughts after reading the first three chapters