Snow paints the busy streets of Canterlot white while colorfully bundled ponies frolic about. The sounds of joy fill the air even more than usual. That can only mean one thing, Hearth's Warming is right around the corner.
This year Div, a member of Princess Luna's House Guard, has a conundrum. To liven up the holiday spirit in the palace the princess and her guards will be exchanging gifts. This has Div nervous, what are you suppose to get a princess who already has a kingdom?
Pffffahahaha!
Yeah... Runic would totally do that. Even if it wasn't true this time!
Oh, he wasn't kidding. Yeah... Runic would totally do that.
When you invent science you get to name it what you want!
Runic fails to realize he does this frequently!
Very fun story! I really enjoyed it =D You certainly have the characterizations down.
What a gorgeously painted image. Well done, Hoof Ross.
heh, heh, which cheeks were rosy?*ahem* Hmmm... I wonder what this foreshadowing is all about.nnnNNOOOO, you never think those thoughts! Not during any season!!
Aww, that explains Silent's mood entirely. I was wondering if it was something like this.
Legitimate laugh out loud.
Awww... If this weren't you writing, I'd think this story was going somewhere sweet. But I know better. I won't be trolled by you a
secondthirdpancakesanother time!Just answer the stallion already!
You are killing me here with the literal LOLs! Would you STAHP
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YOU TRICKED ME AGAIN
I was prepping myself for the non-sweet because you're a troll AND THEN YOU TROLLED ME BY DOING THE SWEET.
I hope you're happy with yourself.
Really well done. Everyone felt perfectly in character. I smiled, I giggled, I chortled, and I cursed your name. I think that deserves a favorite!
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Hey now, syrup is sweet and pancakes are among my favorite things. Besides, Div is AAM's character, I'm not going to do (on screen) naughty things to him.
I can taste the alliteration. Yummy :3
It's not a Q&B story without prancing!
I really liked the pacing of the story, and the buildup to the poem at the end was surprising yet endearing. Really cute! Runic and Silent's personality came through well (#grumpy Silent is best Silent), and the descriptions were good.
Personally, I wish that there were more breaks in sentences. For instance, having
be changed to to
But that's just my opinion. It still works without it!
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I was unaware that another Silent Knight existed.