An accident in your youth left you unable to fly and robbed you of the thing you loved most. What would it take to put that spark back into your life once again?
A/N: I uploaded this before but unfortunately I'm a complete freaking moron. In an attempt to remove another story of mine I ended up deleting this one, and this one did quite well before. I went back and revised certain parts of the story so it flows better and makes more sense as well as adding completely new parts.
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Great story - Can't wait for the next chapter. Second person POV fics are pretty rare so this really got my attention, Will be tracking this.
Tracked. You devious sod, I now have only thoughts base on this.
I'm really liking it, you could use an editor, but still, great job!
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Someone report this guy.
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Already on it
I cant wait for the next chapter!
I like it, a lot! Favorited, and I can't wait for more.
I've become quite the fan of these second person shipfics.
nice! Keep 'em comin'
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More in the way later in the week!
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Cant wait!
Not bad, More words please and keep em comming!
>"closet to Rainbow Dash?"
Freudian slip perhaps?
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Indeed! Thanks for pointing that out!
Dun, dun, duunnn.
I'd hate to on the receiving end of one of Twilight's mental breakdowns.
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Oh I am sure Twilight would apologize after the verbal tear down, seeing as how she is so unsure of herself.
Also good story, I just have to follow it seeing as how I am addicted to 2nd person fics with good grammar (though this chapter had a couple more errors then the last 2).
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Grammar isn't exactly my strongest point. What I lose in grammar, I make up for in my vocabulary
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But I can say I have seen far worse. 
Ooooo, I like vocabulary too, though it needs to be used in a fashion that fits the word, you can't just sprinkle in some words the finish is a "tadah!" cause Homey don't play that.
Maybe it's just me but I'd expect the OC to be resentful of RD since she's basically everything he used to be and wants to be.
If it was me id feel a little bit resentful of her
Great so far. You, sir, have piqued my interest.
Please, by all means, continue.
no update?
I take it this is dead?