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The Second Chapter is already done, but I'm not going to release it until around 8 or so. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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I really like the idea of setting this story in the EG universe because some things work a lot better in a human setting.
Rainbow being disowned and locked up in an asylum makes a lot more sense in the human world than it does in the pony world where they are supposed to be all about friendship, forgiveness and understanding. Plus I gotta believe magic would have quickly determined if she was actually crazy.
However, some things don't work as well:
That said I am interested in seeing where this goes.
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Answering 2: It depends on which country you live, but both the US and Canada laws that allow individuals capable of living on their own from the age of 16, since that's the legal age that a teen can live alone. One of these laws includes Social Services Job Application Aid, Social Income Assistance, and even Schooling Assistance if your grades are high enough.
I know this since I've been living on my own since I was 16 and got kicked out of the house as well. Also, I wrote she was 18, which kinda makes sense, to me anyways. She must have been held back a couple of grades due to her sports life.
Answering 3: According to this > https://www.worlddata.info/average-breastsize.php Website. THE AVERAGE BOOB SIZE IN THE US IS F!
F
Yeah, the size makes sense due to the obesity problem, but come on! It's not fair!
Also, all girls in my family are E-cup and perfectly fit and healthy. So, bleeeeeeehg
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Answering 1: Soooooooooooooooooooooon
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I get that, it's just that with Rainbow it's really hard to picture her with that kind of chest. Even in the stories that give all the girls supermodel bodies Rainbow usually remains the smallest both in chest and height, to match the idea of her being the speedy athlete. It's just really hard to picture her the way you have her here and like I said she doesn't need a large chest in order to be considered attractive. That's just me though.
The school was another thing I forgot to bring up. In pony world, it makes sense she could pick up here life after 3 years locked up but here it's a lot more questionable. It seems unlikely she's kept up in her education so it seems unlikely that she could just jump right into High School no problem especially if she's already 18. But you might cover that problem later for all I know so not a huge deal.
I'm not sure if the numbers make sense since I'm not sure you can continue in High School once you're over 18. But again you might already have an idea for this so I won't worry.
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To answer the school thing? It's based on circumstance. Most schools in Canada and the Us will allow teens who have been forcefully removed from the Education System to return to standard high school up to the age of 19. However, if you leave again for enough time to get expelled due to lack of attendance, then you have to go to the Adult Campus.
I've also been through this....Life is hard.
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I was just going for Anime Levels of oppai for the lulz....
Can't wait for more.
So the source link for the cover art is just for a gotcha moment?
Well, this is pretty interesting so far.
Not a fan of the whole everyone has big boobs trope, I much prefer a bit of variety. Honestly if an Anime has a cast of girls who all have large racks I generally just ignore it cause those ones are almost never worth watching. Frankly, I think it was a missed opportunity to not just have Rainbow be the only one with a ridiculously huge rack it would have been a nice reversal from what's usually seen in these kinds of stories but I guess everyone is gonna end up being a bombshell.
Also not a fan of Flash bashing, I'm mostly indifferent to him but the bashing he's received is some of the most unearned and unentertaining stuff to ever come from the fandom and I'd hope we were past that nonsense seeing as his character has developed enough for most people to see him as a decent guy.
Hopefully, it's not too prominent.
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I forgot to change it.....>:3
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I only planned on Fluttershy, Rainbow, and one other to be bombshells. Everyone gets to be normal. As for Flash? I have my reasons. >:3
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F cup isn't really that overly large. The easiest and most noticeable way to tell breast size is the measure the number of inches the bust juts out from the chest. Most people don't know how to accurately measure them anyway....and I don't blame them. Trying to learn Boob Math was SUCH A PAIN IN THE ASS TO LEARN!!!!!
AA/AAA - Under 1 inch
A - 1 inch
B - 2 inch
C - 3 inch
D - 4 inch
E - 5 inch
F - 6 inch
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Yeah I looked into it and the problem is definitely with Anime and how those shows tend to exaggerate breast sizes. But I'm pretty damn sure most authors use anime logic when picking chest sizes as well.
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Don't listen to him. I like Flash Bashing I don't hate the character but do find it amusing he acting like a over hormone teen, and betraying Sunset...he going to die.
Ok are all the sex scene just going to be aftermaths and no details given or described?
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Just this one. The rest will have all the juicy details.
It's not because I was lazy *cough* Not at all. *Cough*
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uuuhhhhuunnnhh...
Well other then that complaint I love this story, I thinking on he bit on the photo, the old Dash seem to be on the verge of a break down in the end.
I take Dash's parents aren't Windy Whistles and Bow Hoof? Plus Rainbow's family was rich? I'm also assuming that Cinch beating herself up for the last of revenue.
Cover art looks like a Rainbow Dashified Pyrrha Nikos..
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Looking for one that better matches her *cough* personality. *cough*
Please. please for all that is holy and rainbow dash's sexy ass. please update this story
I really like this story hope you continue to work on it!
So he’s not gonna expose or punch sunset?
What is he going to do to her?
Not gonna lie, I definitely would.
What if he’s not dating her?
I don’t think you should be calling anyone dumb.
Don’t worry, luna. Size isn’t everything.
Why didn’t he try that on the other guys?
I’m pretty sure that bad.
Why would he do that?
Was it something important?