• Member Since 7th Mar, 2016
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Queen Sarkas


Changeling Queen Writer

Comments ( 15 )

The cover doesn't seem to be showing up, The link in the description works fine though, I will go ahead and give this one a read.

(After Reading)

Not bad, I'm no expert on clopfics, but this definatley aroused me, though I was pretty distracted because this is the first time I officially learned about the "Hir" and "Shi" pronouns. And also whenever I read them, I can't help but to imagine someone just saying "He" and "She" with a really weird accent. Also there's still a part of me that feels like its just misspelling. I'm sure this uncertain and confusion will go away if I see more. it might take awhile given that I don't really have any strong connection with pronouns, I generally perfer to be called be name and pronouns are whenever it isn't on the tip of anyone's tongue.

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Glad you enjoyed it! And sorry about that, I wrote this one a few years back, and at the time I used Shi and Hir a lot, since then I've gravitated more towards 'she' and 'her', since I kept typing 'she' instead of 'shi'. I went and changed it a few minutes ago, since I stopped using them x3

Not sure about the cover, I should probably read the upload requirements again.

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I find the made up gender pronouns really annoying. Even inanimate objects, when gender is applied to them, just get he or she.

Oi. this was interesting c;

7006122 The name was familiar. The face was familiar. The story was familiar.

I remember you.


*dramatic pause + blackline border + Zoom into narrowing eyes*

We meet again.

Wait i don't understand since when does a a "MALE" dragon has a vaginai dont mind at all about the changeling queen having a dick but should you switch he to a she?

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Why did you think that dragon had a vagina? She was taking him into his butt.

Or you thought about it because of this line?

He felt her force her forked tongue into his mouth and he couldn’t help but moan as she used one of her hooves to rub over his slit.

Well, a dragon's cock is hidden inside, when not erect, so she was rubbing her hoof over his slit from which his erect twin-cocks emerged later because of her attention to that area.

6/10 fapped once would not fap again

7007215 :rainbowderp: OOOOOHHHH that explains alot :rainbowlaugh: now i feel stupid

7010243 From the depths of the Abyss, we have crossed paths many a time. But merely missing each other by time. Days, if not even seconds, brought us within a hair's width.

Until now.

No but in all seriousness, FA.
Sorry, Epic Music/2Steps really gets the creative juices going sometimes. :twilightsmile:

You know what would be really bad for this queen? Sudden dragon greed.

Well, okay. Seen better, seen worse. Pretty solid mechanics, mostly. A few things to fix:

make it’s way past

its

had changed changed color

[delete one changed]

be thrusted in

thrust

Before I read

Why is it Dark ?

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Non-con that becomes con via mind manip, I think is the reason for the tag

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