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Equestria has recently joined NATO. There are a lot of countries and terrorist organizations unhappy about it, but one group sees opportunity.

Rainbow, the secretive NATO anti-terrorist task force, is interested in recruiting some new talent. Princess Celestia sends them six of her best.

A comedy

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 36 )

/slowclap

Very clever TnaB, I won't give it away just yet.

I can fully get behind that.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Gotta give it to the pink! :pinkiehappy:

>mfw I realize what Pinkie meant

>mfw this is the same guy who helped me write my own serious fanfiction

>mfw he actually turns Rainbow Six into something funny

>mfw

Dang, that is very clever but I managed to read the [REDACTED]. :ajsmug:

Can someone spoiler it? I'm on my phone and its a right pain to try to get the thing. Or PM would work too.

This is clever in more ways than one. Good job.
And I'm not even sarcastic here.

Wh..bu...gah...internal stack overflown!¨!&6891!09099...

7192236 The lyrics to Winter Wrap Up.

I would like it more if they were playing the game rainbow 6 seige but until then no favorite

Bwahahah!:rainbowlaugh:

Bravo Zulu!

7192251
Thank you sir. I get it now.

now we need a sequal where they twat terroistes

YES. ALL MY YES.

I have no idea what Rainbow Six is, but Pinkie won you a like and a favourite.

Hehehehehe. Yes!!

Oh yes, the best six, a bunch of citizen and one incredibly important VIP from the alien nation should do the work of trained soldiers and law enforcements... I give them 10 days in the boot camp, if they don't beat Gaz's record they failed in my eyes.

D48

My god. I was enjoying this up until the end, and then you broke out that last joke with Pinkie and now I can't stop laughing. :rainbowlaugh:

I just made it all the way through the novel.
I'm pretty sure Rainbow was under JSOC jurisdiction, and hosted in England.

Story well written, jokes well played, secret message well hidden... How has someone not done this sooner?:rainbowlaugh:

Clever. Very clever

Cause tomorrow spring is here

TNaB... You sneaky little sod!

I should have written three more words to make it 1337

7194071
It's not too late for that.

Good story-idea, by the way (especially the joke in the last line).

7194071

"She then winked."

Boom.

~Skeeter The Lurker

A very clever use of a classic secret code gag. What makes it so clever is that you were able to do that without detracting any from the story.

The most I've ever managed is homages to other stories and word puns in chapter titles.

"go back and look at the first letter of every line."

...Well done.

Mice trick bruh.:pinkiehappy:

Ya mean a nice trick?:ajsmug:

Nope, I mean mice trick!:pinkiecrazy:

Mice trick, really Pinks?:rainbowhuh:

Yepper! Belepper! Pepper! As sure as my name is Tom!:pinkiecrazy:

But your name isn't Tom.:rainbowderp:

Exactly.:pinkiesmile:

7194071 Is there a significance to 1337?

7780338
1337 is literally the most 'leet number to ever exist.

Sweet Celestia. This story is wonderful. :rainbowderp: But winter's just started!

Hahaha. This is a good one.

Honestly expected them to fail hard, but I guess they do work pretty well as a team.

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