Walking into this, I thought, "This is probably going to be cringe".

I was not disappointed.

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On the opposite side of the spectrum, I get dissapointed every time I walk into a Displaced story and am like 'This can't be worse than the last one I read.'

unfortunately, it usually is.

Please stop.

7273465 I have to wonder now what the worst story will be like.

7273474 The ride never ends.

If this is a trollfic, you may want to take notes from my story: [click here]
And this is back when I was starting out as well.

I don't know what everyone here is talking about, this isn't too bad for a first story. I wouldn't mind seeing more for sure. I must add this story has less spelling and grammar mistakes than most stories on FIMFiction.

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No, it is not a trollfic, but thanks.

7274113

Thanks!

7273871

Bad parody fics?

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Thanks! This is my first ever POSTED story, after all. And my first ever displaced/displacer one, as well.

My other, non-posted fics have to do with the real deal version of my character, who he was turned into when he went to Equestria, that is, fighting against different beings from different series- mainly video game series, like Undertale, where he fights Flowey or Asriel, with the help of Sans and ol' Gaster...

I haven't even brought up Lord Metarex's (L.M.'s) brother, T.M.S., who is 104- a year older than L.M., but is still quite badass in battle, no matter what...

Hi, it's L.M. here! So, every two chapters, I'll be answering a couple questions from you guys, whether it be the past of L.M., the Elemental 5, LSB, or something else! So, hit me with your best questions!

7278652

What would YOU have done?

7278683

Then why are you still here? You can leave at any time. The door is to your left.

7278975

None of your business.

Now, go to those crappy-ass stories that no one likes and stay there.

7279026

True, but I posted it not TWO days ago. TWO! You wouldn't like it if you were criticised on your first fic, which was up for. Only. TWO. DAYS! It gets pretty annoying when you have to deal with that!

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Also, you DO realize that there are THOUSANDS of Displaced/Displacer fics on this site, right?

You just pissed off about a quarter of this community by saying that.

7279067

... Question: Is there an ignore feature? If there isn't, I'd love to have one...

Also, I have ADH-fucking-D, the only fucking thing I have. No Mental Handicaps, no diseases, nothing. Just ADHD.

7279103

You fucking said that I have a Mental Handicap and you're constantly annoying me... plus, you said that this is a trollfic when it is not a trollfic.

And now that I know there is a delete comment button...

... I will be deleting comments that are negative or that say this is a trollfic.

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Hey, not all Displaced fics are bad! And none are worse than the other!

... except for those that have bad grammar, pronunciation, etc...
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... I'm being honest.

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... Again, deleting negative comments.

Kid, lemme give you some advice—stop deleting comments. It just makes you look bad.

7279247

Just because a fic has good grammar and punctuation doesn't make it a good fic. It can have perfect grammar and still have a terrible plot.

You know what also makes a story look bad? A bunch of deleted comments in the comments section.

7279320

Tell them to stop being assholes, then.

7279233

... I will be deleting comments that are negative or that say this is a trollfic.

I urge you to reconsider.

7279324

... Same as I told PegasusMesa.

Also, that isn't entirely true. Sometimes it can be the other way round, with a cool and great plot, but very bad grammar. Or it can have a terrible plot and terrible grammar. Sometimes, however, it can have an awesome plot and excellent grammar, and this I absolutely LOVE!

7279330

Too late.

Also, I saw the blog entry, but still.

The murder in this comment section.

ayyy lmao

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... I like you.

(L.M. appears, carrying groceries, before he sees the mayhem in the comments and says "Displace, what the Fuck did you do this time?"...)

Don't ask, L.M... Don't ask.