Edited: Wed. Jan. 3. 2018.
Fluttershy asks Rainbow to help her with pick-up lines because she likes her. Of course Fluttershy's going on Pinkie's advice, so it's really very wrong. But neither of them know it, and ignorance is bliss.
What will happen? Will the pick-up lines become more than just practice? Will Rainbow actually like Fluttershy back?
That was great.
I wholeheartedly approve.
Uh, you forgot to mark it as 'Complete'.
7403106 thx bro.
7480877 thank you!
I AM DYING OF CUTENESS OVERLOAD AND LAUGHTER!!!!!
7509955 YAY! Thank you!
Oh, that 'last name' one...!
7519591 is bad, I know
7519666 Maybe...? I'm honestly not sure. It might be bad. It might be genius.
7519678 hold up lemme look at it for the first time in months again!
7519678 okay, yeah, it genius!
But the girlfriend one,
I specially picked these because they're on the borderline of horrible, and very sweet and witty. It's the perfect balance!
Honestly though, the pick up lines Fluttershy got from her brothers, uh uh.
7519720 I think you managed to find most of the least sleazy ones out there, somehow. The last name one, in particular, suggests almost noble intentions (albeit in a possessive, patriarchal way). The girlfriend one was great, as was the air con.
Also, good story, well done!
7519730 merci beacoup!
Pinkie the damn stalker!!!
Some of the pick-up lines were cheesy, yet heartfelt. I loved this! =)
I love this story. Definitely getting the feels πππ
I love how you gave mystery to what Rainbow whispered βΊπβΊ More cute πππ
*dies from cute*