Words said so often that they lack any meaning.
Adagio Dazzle has a problem.
Basically... She's homeless.
Without her voice, well, she's nothing.
No free hotel rooms, no admirers there to help her. Adagio can't even sing on the side of the road for bits!
Good thing this villain knows just where to go.
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Hm. All things considered, that was surprisingly civil. She came, "politely" imposed, Fluttershy found her spine and asked her to leave, and she did, just like Twilight said.
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So, I am still new to FimFiction, and, well, I don't know how to uncover spoilers.
Help? Sorry!
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They vanish if you mouse over them. And, welcome to FimFic!
Awww! Read this and loved it, then saw my name at the bottom and squeed! That's very sweet of you, nobody has ever written a fanfic for me before. And those two characters are my absolute favourites
Oddly enough it's the below commenter, Eyeswirl, who has written pretty much the definitive work on Adagio/Fluttershy interactions, I cannot recommend enough his story called Sucker for a Cute Face, it's really very good.
The only bit here I wasn't quite sure about was a line when Fluttershy goes to see Sunset and says 'you like like you're busy' - should that be 'look like'?
Thank you
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I'm glad you like it! I will check that out and edit it.
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Thank you! I am on an iPad, so not really sure how that would work. I tried holding on it, but it didn't seem to work...
edit: fixed it! There were indeed two "likes".
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[REDACTED!]
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Thank you! Yep. Wasn't really sure how to end it, but that seemed good enough. If you didn't want to spoil it for people, you can delete the comment now.
Read the first chapter of your story, "A Sucker for a Cute Face". Looks pretty good, but unfortunately, I don't have the time (or patience) to read long stories like that. E-books are not my favorite, so I only read short stories on Fimfiction. Sorry!
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Don't worry about it, I can fully sympathize with not wanting to get into a long, long story with lots of forgettable details, more-so if it isn't even over yet and doesn't get updated for weeks or months at a time. I've had to re-read SFaCF myself quite a few times just to be sure I'm not forgetting anything important!
Very well played, Addie just breezes in and mooches off Fluttershy until she quite reasonably snaps. I'd have thought Addie would've given Fluttershy more trouble at the end, but this is the best way the plot could've been handled within the word count.
Well, this was a nice little story. It felt really random, though. XD
Since you said to point out mistakes:
There's a word missing there.
That should be "retrieved".