Words said so often that they lack any meaning.
Shiver, a batpony still searching for her purpose, knows that Princess Luna hated her since the day they met.
So when she receives a letter from Luna asking for her, Shiver has no idea what to expect....
=~o~=
Written for the Second Annual Batpony Writing Contest. I tried to write a semi-sentimental story, it didn't really work, but here ya go!
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This line I particularly liked!
Needs to be longer. Celestia needs to show more emotion to Luna. Then she can be the sister that Luna desperately needs. Good story anyway.
My main oc is going as herself as she believes, being a former villain and really tall and strange looking (my profile picture is her) she terrifies everyone anyway. (That's true.) My other oc just thinks she's being a downer.
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Thanks for the input. I'm not so good at writing sentimental stories, and I don't have a lot of time nowadays, so...
Anyway, thanks for reading!
I'm not sure where I was going with the epilogue, I just felt like I needed to write it.
Thanks for your info, it helps a lot! I'll do better next time.
7651966 I tried to edit it after i posted it to add: it's just my opinion though.