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i think you had to much fun writing this
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Hah, how can it ever be 'too much' fun? Well, as long as you got a kick out of it. That's my intent.
man, you. are. a. bucking. fantastic. clopfic. writing. machine.
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Tisk, you got it backwards. It's a novel with clop stapled to it. I got clop in your plot.
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ololol, thats diiiiirty!
Seriously though. You have a heck of a lot of skill developing characters, and. . . arousing. . . your audience. At least in my opinion.
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*wingbows* Thank you for the complement. I'm hoping to prove that even clopfics can have story and depth to them.
If you think the mature sections are naughty now. Just wait till the rest of the characters come into play.
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Hoooooh boy. And you are quite welcome.
The character development is delicious, and the clop scenes are nice too. It only gets better with every chapter.
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if you have fun writting this...then i think you will have a major joy ride writing luna's turn
Lighthoof is quite possibly the best friend ever.
"She would moan and gasp at his menstruation..."
"She would moan and gasp at his menstruation..."
"She would moan and gasp at his menstruation..."
...Uh, I think the word you're looking for is ministration. Wow, did that kill the mood.
Sir we are losing blood flow to the brain!
Damn it did penis get a hold of the controls again?
Lighthoof is too lucky. Now he's gonna be getting lucky with 2 mares?
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Hah, wait till you get to chapter 38.
1688505 damn you well no sleep for me tonight
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Well that was erotic.......
a fun clop fic chapter, as expected.
I really love the way you portrayed Sherry's need, it really makes sense, both to her character and personality as you've shown her....but that's really in the psychology side and I honestly just don't care to overthink it that far.
Yay for stallions stuffing and cuddling <3
*multiple little errors such as loose instead of lose and etc, but whatever, it's a clop fic, not gonna do the grammar Nazi thing here
During the first I was like "All the chapters".
Next mature chapter...
"Goddamn me and my Promises to myself!"
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Not sure I understand?
So. Second Read Through. Bit more critical, and I find my first... uh... problem I guess is the right word. I HATE how at the beginning when Light is sitting in his chair he Is Treating Sherry like a cat. That's what it reminds me of, a James Bond villain with their cat sitting in their lap. And even though they may have that kind of relationship I see Sherry as being more dominant then that. Not to the point where she is his mistress but outside of the sex and stuff she wouldn't act like his submissive but his equal you know? Maybe sit in his lap and cuddle him, just... not him treating her like a pet. And I take evidence for my argument as to how she treated and spoke to Star the ENTIRE time.
I dunno. I felt I would give my two cents. Take it as you will, I'm just being honest.
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It wasn't suppose to be Sherry being submissive. It was just how I was dealing with pony biology in how they sit and such. Light was chilling in his chair, and Sherry wanted affection while they chatted with Star. Unfortunately, I suppose it does give the impression of cat-like. While Sherry is very much the dominate personality of the relationship, she understand that it's still Light's dorm-room and isn't trying to take over his chair. Plus, she is trying to act all sweet and such, since it's a pretty big favor she's asking from both of them. *shrug* Meh, I wouldn't look too much into it. It was simply a pose that I imaged she'd take, having 4 legs and all.
Mare jelly?
Haystroglide, surely.
Oral is often done very wrongly by many authors who seem to forget for a moment that ponies are not human shaped.
Welcome attention to detail. Even though it was oral, and there wasn't one.
*looks down*
I have the weirdest erection right now
Well, that just happened.
a hot chapter yes but at the same time so tender and so caring she loves both of her stallions.
this chapter is still at the top in my list for showing love between three pony's.
and a supper good clop chapter also.
Harts Fire
The scene was quite well written. This pleases me.
Nice. The clop was well written, but I also liked the almost foot note of the acceptance of herds. It leaves the story open to some interesting possibilities.