• Published 20th Aug 2012
  • 974 Views, 15 Comments

Patches and Bubbles - loststone



A young gryphon is searching for her sister Gilda, and along the way many shinanigans happen.

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Now I am really really sorry

Okay guys I am really sorry to say this, but I am just not good enough of a writer to continue writing this. I feel like every time I try and do anything towards this story I just do more harm than good. So, and I am not happy about saying this, I am canceling this story.

I will say that part of the reason I am canceling this is because of how it was met in the past. I mean it, when I first started this story I had hoped that it would have been the one that would get me past a thousand views per chapter. I wanted as many people as I could possibly get to enjoy reading my story. My hopes for it were set so high and I did everything I could to get it in top condition. I got a special My Little Pony style faun as its main picture. Hell I even got two very well known writers, Rust and Ex-Nihilos, and one of the proofreaders of Silent Ponyville to help me on it, but they all quit on me in their own ways and what some of them said dealt a heavy blow to the confidence I had in my writing skills. After they left I was forced to find my new proofreaders, which I am very thankful towards. Unfortunately, by then the damage was done. The joy I found in writing was destroyed after that and now it is very hard to see it as more than just a chore.

But hey, I'm not the kind of jerk that would leave you just hanging with what I have given you. No, instead here is a link to a G-docs containing all of what I had already written for the future after Anasta and Hexxus's adventure in Low Nest.

This is what you click to get to the G-docs.

Once again, I am really sorry about just leaving it how it is, I hope this will be enough to make it up to you all. Please feel free to comment on what I would have done, and if you feel like trying to pick up the pieces and finishing the story or if you would like to try rewriting it then be my guest. I would love to see its end, and if it were in the hands of a better writer, who knows just how good it could be. Just tell me about it before you do so I can see how it turns out.

Comments ( 3 )

Well that sucks, this is one of my favorite stories out there, the second one i ever favorited and all around an excellent story. I am sad to see that it, like too many before it was canceled before it's time.

Don't feel too bad at the end of the day man. Writing this kind of stuff is very hard. I myself tried to write stories at least 3 times. I never could finish them.

Perhaps in a few months down the line, you might want to pick up this story again. Who knows? But if you don't, that's alright.

2018759 2017901 ... Yeah I may pick it up later. That is for future me to know, but for now I am done with it. I hope you guys like what I was going to have chapter wise on that G-doc I linked. There are a few moments in it i can say i am proud about.

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