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Crimson Blade79


I'm a big gamer, movie fan, and part time fanfic typer.

Comments ( 36 )

What game, comic or show is Travis from anyway?

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He's from the same universe as Connor Smith. In other words he's from, "The Price To Pay For Power", universe. Another fiction I came up with.

Extremely rushed

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This is just the first chapter. Besides, do you think Travis will stop here. This story has a potential for many chapters and an ending of it's own that is different from Connor's story.

7852488 This is rushed. Ignoring the inherent (and widely known) shortcomings of this sort of plot, a serious fic is usually 2k a chapter. At least. Doing the least amount required by the site isn't enough to build the setting and it's characters.

Comment posted by Crimson Blade79 deleted Jan 8th, 2017

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This story is like an alternate version of The Price To Pay For Power. This is if Travis did all he could to conquer Equestria.

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Yes, in the original version, Travis wasn't supposed to conquer anything. He just sat on Tirek's throne and acted like a lazy asshole

well I just started hating Travis a lot

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You're supposed to. In fact I made this story to show how much of an asshole Travis can be. Just imagine what he did back home.

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One question though, what do you hate the most about Travis or what he did so far?

The time for voting is running out. Better hurry if you want to determine which ending comes first.

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I'm glad you liked the ending. Just one question though, what do you hate about Travis the most?

7888925 Hmm. Lets see, killing Shining Armor, Princess Cadence and Flurry Heart is one thing, being a cold heartless killer is another thing that I hate.

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Remember the part where he was responsible for the death of Connor's girlfriend? Can you believe that Connor was willing to forgive Travis for all that he has done?

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Read the chapter called Brother vs Brother and Weirdmageddon.

I do want to see a sequel.

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What did you think of it? Can you believe Travis was responsible for the death of Connor's girlfriend?

Does Travis sound like Travis Touchdown from No More Heroes? Or did I already ask this?

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No, you didn't ask it before and no it's not Travis Touchdown. It's Travis Smith from my first fanfiction I posted on this site called, The Price To Pay For Power.

I also want to see a sequel.

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Alright then. The sequel will be coming soon.

I think its so rushed its off putting sorry:ajsleepy:

It's so cheasy and bad and I just keep cringing


I LOVE IT

Roll the credits because I forgot to add some! Oh and here's the song for the credits for all you lucky readers who are still reading this.

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=lLFaFMD-VNs

Umm I think you made a mistake at the end there

The centaurs complied and they all went their separate ways except one. This one lead Connor to Tirek's old bedroom.

Isn't it Travis who is here?

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Thanks for catching that, I would've never noticed.

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i see this story has a bunch of dislikes, why is that? i saw one comment mention it being rushed

Playing Xbox after theft

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