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Stop using formatting. Also, you're supposed to describe things. Linking to "Anime-Guys-anime-guys-6494321-960-720.jpg" is nearly the polar opposite of describing. Your story seems to be mostly dialogue/narration and literally no...well, story.
Sorry, the story will truly develop in the next chapters. You could give me some ideas if you want.
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Constructive criticism is appreciated so thanks. I'm writing my next chapter soon.
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I edited the first chapter and I just finished my second chapter. I hope it's better than the last one.
I always wanted to do this. Even though this is my own fanfiction I can't resist. First Comment!
One question to all of the readers. Who do you think Connor should see first?
You can now vote who Connor sees first on the way to Ponyville. If you don't vote within 2 hours I'll make the decision myself so unleash the comments and votes.
7832783 Princess Celestia
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Perhaps later in the story when he goes to Canterlot. Right now he's going to Ponyville so do you want to choose again?
7833280 Fluttershy or Twilight
Well okay that happened. A little to trust isn't she?
7834463 that was fast man...
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Connor is a master of speech. He can get himself out of many situations by lying, bartering, and much more.
7823462 faceplam
Dude don't beat up the guards. Do you really think that his past gf would approve of him whaling on a bunch of nincompoops just cause he could. You can probably just keep dodging in till they collapse and draw on their faces or something.
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She approved of him killing that thug.
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He also beat up bullies before.
Does he have Alex Mercer in Delsin Rowe's powers and if so what all are the powers he has
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I know this sounds a little OP but he has the powers of the entire DC, Mortal Kombat, Fallout, Prototype, Capcom, Marvel, and Cartoon Network universes.
7841713 so he has Dragon Ball Z powers to I guess that was on Cartoon Network
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Adult Swim which is on Cartoon Network after 7:00 and yes he does have those powers from dbz because he watched that channel too.
7842357 how about Hellsing ultimate
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If that is on Adult Swim, then yes.
7843280 it was at one point a while back
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Then yes, he does have those powers.
7843415 Naruto is also on Cartoon Network Sonic X was on Cartoon Network at one time Case Closed was there too Robot Chicken Rick and Morty Futurama Family Guy American Dad superjail and hundreds of other things I gotta finish looking up codename kids Next Door
7843415 you know my character is almost like yours accept the difference in powers they're both overpowered my character has 7 powers which are as followed
1, Alicorn physiology
2, metaphysical regeneration
3, regenerative empowerment
4, enhanced power replication
5, knowledge replication
6, Chi manipulation
7, and last Aura manipulation
My character is a planeswalker the concept of my character is that for every fictional reality there is a place where that fiction is real and my character is able to travel to each and every one and able to copy any powers they see
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I know that and can you spot the memes and references in this story. If so, what are they?
7843756 I'm not so good at spotting references I'll admit that I have to go over the entire story again just to find them also your Rainbow Dash's is a dick
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How about that one time she shouted, "You motherbucker!" I even laughed at that line and I wrote it.
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The only way for my character to get other people's powers is by absorbing their powers or souls.
7843866 yes but even if my character copies other people's powers they still have to train in them just because you know how the powers work and you have the power doesn't mean you're automatically a master at using those powers my character is is not some unkillable Mary Sue sure it take a lot to kill my character but they are still killable it just takes a lot of power and someone on par with my character to be able to kill them
7843978 alright who has the balls to dislike my comment
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Souls carry the person's mind which is why Shang Tsung has a wide variety of fighting styles in Mortal Kombat.
7845704 yes but he'd need the muscle memory to be able to use their fighting styles as well as they can
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He did have the muscle memory. He also trained himself to master new moves as soon as he learned them.
MOAR!!!!
I'm officially out of ideas for the next chapter. Can anybody help with that?
Seems like he went a bit mad with power, from those memories it seemed he was a very moral heavy person and he just murdered three ponies without a care in the world.
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He is a bit mentally unstable.
lol.
I now have a challenge for anyone reading this comment. If you are the first one that can make an animation or make fan art of one of my fan fictions, you get one request that I can't deny. The request can't be about any sort of clop though, that is my only limit. Are you up to the challenge? You also have to do this by the end of this month or your request is nullified.
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The results for the competition are in and the winner is: Nobody because no one has entered anything. Better luck next time.
This is the shortest fight scene I ever made.
Which anime?
None of the known ones. I just made one up so it may be considered an anime universe. You can criticize me if you want.
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I said none of the known.