During the tornado incident at Wonderbolts Academy, Rainbow Dash just barely managed to save her friends, but was sucked into the out-of-control tornado and disappeared. Many search parties were sent out but found no trace of her, as a result she was declared MIA...
Five Years Later...
Scootaloo has recently been accepted into the Wonderbolts Academy, hoping to follow in the footsteps of her idol. However during her first mission, her team is attacked by a group of Pegasi belonging to a large mercenary group called the Shadowbolts, and the leader of this team is none other than her idol; Rainbow Dash!
Scootaloo tries to convince her old idol to come back to her friends, however she outright declines, saying that it's too late for her. Scootaloo and her group just barely escape the attack and upon reporting back to their commander, Rainbow Dash is declared a fugitive.
However, has her idol really gone rogue? Or is there something more to the story?
(I don't own the artwork, that and the characters used in this story belong to Hasbro and their creators)
Whoa. Serious yet intreaging. Please continue.
This is an interesting idea and has a lot of potential!
A lot can happen in five years; ponies can get married, pregnant, die... it’d be interesting to see how each pony moves on in those five years, how Pinkie lives without Rainbow, how Lightning deals with the guilt, it could be a really awesome character study!
It badly needs an editor, but it is a good start. I’d be happy to see it continue someday.
Keep up the hard work, and all good things
Duskhoof
It's really good :D
Shame this story didn’t go anywhere. :(
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I’m working on it as best as I can. Have lots of notes written but depression has been a horrible thing that’s been keeping me from writing.