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So stuff like this happens to be my jam.
First time I encountered it was Final Fantasy VI, where Terra had been wearing the slave crown so long that if she ever knew how to feel, she'd forgotten. And while that could've been done better I feel, it was a game and not a book, so I hardly hold it against one of my favorite games ever.
As this is a book (sorta kinda close enough), I get to enjoy a focus of watching robo-pone try to puzzle her way through feelings and look forward to how things are going to look moving forward and how she's going to deal with the complexities that follow. So far, you're doing it right and thus far I have no legit criticism.
...really, the only gripe I've got is that you've gotten me hooked and I can't read the rest yet. Curses!
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I'm a sucker for compliments like this. Have the next chapter a day early. Posted just for you.
Question. Why does Dolphin have a hand? I didn't see an anthro or human tag.
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Because I made a typo and didnt catch it! Or maybe he has a collection of "things"... but thanks for pointing it out!
Errr... 3 typos. Whoops! Must have wrote this after writing some of double down. Sorry! Fixed now.