Ever since her return from the millennial banishment, Luna is settling back into her duties as princess of the night. Things appear well at first, but eventually her heart starts to weigh heavy for one simple reason...
Motherhood, Something Luna always envied in her subjects and a joy that is seemingly destined to go un-granted. With having children naturally being an impossibility and the adoption of fouls forbidden to royalty by law. Luna starts to loose hope.
Everything changes when Equestria is visited by the Switch, a superhero with the ability to travel in-between universes. Not only will he show the ponies of Equestria just what humans are capable of... he may finally be the one with an answer to Luna's problem.
The Raising is the First in a hopefully several story saga and I would appreciate your feedback with this one. This story is a healthy mix of serious plot lines and comedic scenarios and I hope you Enjoy!!
Also If someone would like to design a cover art for me I would very much appreciate it!
I feel that this story is for everyone but I have rated it Teen due to violence, swearing and narcotic use.... But with the stuff my generation watches it should hardly matter!! XD
This story might have great potential! Hope to see more!
looking good so far keep it up.
Interesting.
I set this story to watch, and it shows up in the recently updated list on the site, but no unread chapter since yesterday.
Did you accidentally publish something then remove it?
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Yes I accidentally published and unfinished chapter then I had to remove It
Apologies, I will be less clutsy in the future
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Thanks buddy I appreciate it!! I hope the rest of the story is as good
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You shall my friend, hopefully this will turn into a very healthy sized story... and one of many at that!
I'm glad you like it! Makes me feel all warm inside
Is Luna going to fall in love with the human and give birth to a colt later in the story?
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Not quite buddy! I dont want to spoil too much obviously but Switch has the ability to travel between universes.
And if you believe the Multiverse theory, then there are potentially many possible solutions to Luna's problem.
All will be revealed in the next chapter or two. And they will be out very shortly
Zgodba je bila odlična! Všeč mi je bil razvoj znakov in način prehoda med prizori! Vaš opis me je srečal in upam, da boste dobro! Prepričajte se, da omaka v perilu ne postavite!
i think you ment he Dame saved Rarity's life! or he saved Rarity's life!
nice but recent canon shows alicorns can give birth. but still nice i'll just go with you wrote this before flurry heart was born or in this world flurry heart is a miracle
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Ah yes.... honestly I hadn't considered this in massive detail, But fear not sir! You've given me a pretty cool idea which ill implement into very next chapter. it will hopefully explain the details surrounding the circumstances of the two sisters.
But thank you for letting me know sir, I appreciate it!
8614061 your welcome then
i wonder is the opponent Celestia herself, Luna, or Discord or even Pinkie
I really hope that when he fights Celestia he completely destroys her.
Well, this can either got good or bad depending on Luna’s reaction.
loving t so far.
Please can you update, i have falling in love with this story.
i have the felling there going to be a bitchlestia on carver
Is Celly Is gonna be like the mother in law form hell?
Interesting, I half expected the mask to cover a little bit more of his face otherwise the writing did him justice
*squee* I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Hey buddy!! Thanks for the support and im sorry i didnt reply sooner. Been busy moving house!
The next chapter will be out very soon indeed, my friend! Most likely the next couple of weeks!
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, but what i will say is she definitely isnt happy, what i'll leave to your imagination is how she reacts!!
I don't want to reveal too much, my friend
Thanks for your support, it is greatly appreciated!
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Indeed matey, Carver is gonna have to deal with an upset and angry Celestia! All to come with the next chapters!
Thanks for reading too, my friend, it means a lot
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And I thank you for that!! The fact you guys like the story is completely awesome to me!
I don't mean to sound pushy, but will the update be soon?
woohoo! looking forward to more
I am not liking the look she is giving me