Rainbow couldn't be happier with Twilight- the alicorn princess is the perfect mare for her, everything she could ask for.
Unfortunately, there are also a few more things that she didn't ask for.
Just an introvert who likes My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. I also like to write MLP fanfiction. Twilight Sparkle is my favorite pony.
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this story is quite beautiful. Can't stop smiling.
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Glad you enjoyed it! I still may have a few ideas to include in further chapters, so I'm leaving it as incomplete for now.
Liking it, but how and when did Twilight get as big as Celestia?
That was hilarious
I want to see more twilight when it's her time of the month.
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It's been left a mystery- maybe I'll explain it later.
how big have you made her? I would image at least Rainbows legs being dragged along the floor.
Twilight needs to adopt a child I guess.
Not sure how much I like it, but I admit I'm not exactly into reading mood right now, which means I won't give you a up- or downvote just for that.
I'm only slightly confused, in a way I like weird stuff like that, but it isn'T always working for me, so I'm going to ask if Twilight was acting like a cat so far.
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yep that was my favourite chapter till now and the one that actually made me wanting to read more.
However I'm not sure if I would not want more characters and at least a bit slice of life being involved, so far the chapters don'T feel really connected and it could be some sort of collection of one-shots.
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She's supposed to be about as tall as Celestia, so yeah, Rainbow's legs would kind of be dangling...
And yeah, she's kind of been acting like a cat...
<3<3
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Why is Twilight acting like that? She's acting like a pregnant woman mixed with a dog. I highly doubt it's a period, so what happens to Alicorn once a month?
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It's actually supposed to be her/alicorns' version of estrus (heat)... So it makes them really "lovey-dovey" so to say. And very emotional.
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Ok so I take it that it's your own headcanon on estrus? You do actually know what Equine heat and estrus is right?
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Sort of my headcanon, I guess. And I know the general purpose of estrus/heat... I like this version better.
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To each their own lol
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Though, now that I think about it, it reminds me of this lol
Still loving this so much. Thanks for the chapters!
We need a chapter with rainbow and twilight going out with cadance and shining. Two alicorns would be hilarious
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he mentioned in the next part how big Twilight is.
I'm actually a bit curious. Why do they need to eat meat?
Oh lord this is me!
This Is ADORABLE!!!
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Are you Rainbow, Twilight, or a dude that obliviously hits on lesbians?
🤣
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Twilight. I am that much of a Cuddle Bug.
I feel sorry for Luna.
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I don't. That was funny as heck. Especially when Twilight threatened to tattle to Cadence.
Rainbow needs a quick biology lesson it seems. Heck even if alicorns aren’t magic Twilight is still the equivalent of Andre the Giant.
Tirek really can’t read a room.
Pretty sure Prince Galewing is using latency wrong. You could say his arrival was latent before he got there, but his use of present tense implies he was still in a transitional state.
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Must just be an alicorn thing in this story. Though not the only one to use the idea that alicorns are carnivores.
*Gasp*
How had I never read this before?
Wonder if Flurry is why they made such an agreement.
Twilight's Mind "My Rainbow Dash! Mine!" or "This pony is my pony. There are many like her but this one is mine."
Rainbow had every right to cuff her. She set a boundary and it was crossed
Well, this is getting unhealthy
And.....really unhealthy, yeah. Is OP ok?
Aaand abuse. OP, should I call the local protective services!?
personally I wouldn't mind at all... you kinda set up everything for it nearly every chapters
Poor Luna
Boy,Alicorn Twilight has some serious hormones.
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Am I missing some kind of joke? What's abusive about this chapter.