After finally working up the courage to ask out the Princess of Friendship, you pop the question, and much to your pleasant surprise, she says yes. Problem is, now you have to find a way to impress her enough to where she wants more dates afterward. And after a day of scouring Ponyville and thinking of Twilight's interests and dislikes, inspiration finally strikes...
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I love how the title is a reference to Lucy In the Sky with Diamonds. Are you a Beatles fan by chance?
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No, just saw an opportunity for a pun.
This was pretty good, even if not much really happened. A follow-up would be nice.
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I'll think about it. If I come up with any ideas, I'll see how they look written down, but for now, this is a one off practice story. But I will say that I do have something else in the works. Something with a very... different tone (no, not set in the same universe).
This is good. Its well written. Spelling and grammar are all good,
I do feel like the ending could have been a little better, Even if it just ended with a peck on the cheek,
The way its written at the moment feels like its set up for another chapter.
Still I enjoyed it and look forward to reading more from you. Well done.
Cute.
Needs a sequel.
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Actually, it was just a one off written for the sake of practice. If I have any ideas for a sequel, I'll write them, but believe it or not, my real specialty is in action drama. At least as far as fanfiction goes. I've already got an entire trilogy planned, but given the climactic nature of all of them, I'll hold off until Season 9 of the show. The supposed finale (Anyone else get a hollow pang in their heart?
). Regardless, I appreciate the feedback. 
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