Equestria. A world of magic and monsters. A world of love and hate. Of good and evil. The line between them should be clear. Black and white. Yet when a mysterious young colt with a strange secret appears with new warnings, will Twilight and her friends determine which side he's on, or will they discover just how blurred the line can be?
Just a note: Ponyville is no stranger than Mannville, of which there are three alone in the USA. And let's not forget the Isle of Mann in the Atlantic ocean.
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say those things if they new who it really was --> should be KNEW, not NEW
Kek, did that Tranny Phantom kid really come back from the grave? This feels like something he* wrote.
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I love the story so far could use some dubble checks on some spacing but other then that seems good to me, hope to see more one day
This story is stolen I've read this before
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on this site, it must have been removed
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Pics or it didn't happen.
Color me very intrigued. And very impressed. This is a good story so far. Endearing, well written, and funny. I don't at all mind the fluff/filler in lieu of the plot here. This works as a slice of life just as much as a regular narrative.
9.5/10. Outstanding work, and looking forward to more. Have a favorite and a thumbs up.
Hope this continues. Why doesn't danny just explain why "phantom" is there in the first place. Earn their trust as phantom.
This was really good, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Yeah, you read it in Fanfiction.net cause that's where I originally posted it. My screen name is the same here as it is over there. This story is mine. Both here and in Fanfiction.net. IF you don't believe me, go and message the author over on Fanfiction and I'll tell you the same thing over there.
Ooooo! This just got gud! Better and better, I say.
Now that I think about it, I don't think I read the original story... oh well! This story is pretty darn good anyways. If anything, this is probably the best re write I've seen yet.
Lol! Blackmail material, here we come!
Awww! How cute!
Is this story alive?
Hahaha Hahaha Hahaha
But you can tell princess Luna in fact why hasn’t Luna dune something already I thought she was able to help ponies in there dream so why hasn’t she??
I think that Danny need to tell the twilight and girls the truth sometime soon they have the right to now expel after this
No you not sans from undertale is.
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Everyone but nights owls are going to be night owls.
To bad Tia and discord were not in this.
Nightmare before Christmas anyone?
Its always the good stories that die
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Prank wars are no joke
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You know that people can have accounts on different websites right?
You can't spell ytrap without trap!
Spike: media0.giphy.com/media/BfiL8ZJWqfw7C/giphy.gif
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Sounds more like this is what they're talking about.
Descriptions sound very similar, but it doesn't look like it was stolen. Personally, I've read lots of fanfictions with roughly the same description and plot and sometimes between different sites too, but there's always some kind of difference that makes them stand out from each other, like the title, the character name, different plot twists, etc.
Still enjoyed reading this, despite numerous parts of the text missing spaces around the italic text.
so where did the plushies came from?
I for one think it's cute
Good God I cannot believe I didn't realize that until now
That has got to be the sweetest thing ever
Dawn the sibling feels just got hit with this one
When your father figure is someone who shouldn't even care about you.