Sunset & The New Year’s Peacock

Sunset and her friends welcome the new year in the most menmerable of ways, with a ‘borrowed’ Peacock.

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Written for The weekly writer prompt

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Tim the Planes-pony

Tim the Planes-pony #1 · Jan 14th, 2018 · · ·

Peacocks don't gobble, they make a kind of clucking noise, and they make a very loud cry when startled. Aside from that not bad.

Violet Rose in The Rain

Violet Rose in The Rain #2 · Jan 14th, 2018 · · ·

I'm going to have ask why you would submit this story to the WHJT group. The main story in that group does not take anything that occurs after Season 3 into account, and yet here you are, bringing in an MLP EQG story.

TheOneAJ

TheOneAJ #3 · Jan 14th, 2018 · · ·

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May have been an accident. Just learned you can submit a story to a group more easily now

OmniFox

OmniFox #4 · Jan 14th, 2018 · · ·

May the Peacock be with you.

MixMassBasher

MixMassBasher #5 · Aug 7th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Silly story though probably needs some grammar work

ScisetShimmerEvan

ScisetShimmerEvan #6 · Sep 30th, 2022 · · ·

“Well,” Pinkie answered, circling her foot, “I wouldn’t say, steal, as much as, borrowed it, from the zoo without them knowing.”

God damn it Pinkie.

“They…” Fluttershy muttered, “I… Ihad nothing to do with it. Rainbow only asked me if they had peacocks in the more interactive are of the zoo. The parts that have very low fences and you can get up close to some of the more tame animals. Honest!”

area*

“Barrow!” Rainbow Dash correct.

corrected*

Fluttershy simply nodded, not wanting to mention that it had only been a community college for three months before he dropped out.

How am I not surprised.

The girls all laughed, while Dash fumed, Pinkie Pie continued their story. “So Dashie here asks me if I knew of anything, since i know all things that have to do with holidays and parties. Which i do! Did you know th eorgins of why we kiss under the mistletoe is because a Norse god was afraid everything was out to kill him?”

the orgins*

“Really?” Rarity asked, looking over Twilight's shoulder. “What does that have to do with miselot?”

mistletoe*

“Oh the god ended up being killed by it in his sleep by a arrow laced with misetole, so it’s hung to remember him by,” Pinkie said.

Once again it's mistletoe.

“Sure,” Sunset gritted her teeth, “for someone old lost human tradition?”

Remove 'someone' makes no sense with it.

“Um,” Twilight coughed, “I just looked it up. While there is such a tradition, you are aware said traditon involes, um, eating said peacock.”

Regret it now Dash?

Pinkie held her hands behind her back and looked around the room. Eventually glancing at the peacock, who Fluttershy had dropped to the floor next to it in a defensive position. “So, um…Anyone want dibs on the wings?” Pinkie Pie asked.

I hate you Pinkie.

“Alright, well, we had our fun, but,” Sunset said, grabbing Pinkie’s and Rainbows Arms, dragging them to the door, “time to take our ‘special’ party guest home, NOW!”

arms*

Sunset sat down on the sofa next to Twilight and shook her head. “Just so long as it doesn't…” Sunset's eyes widened, as Jeffery did just the thing she had about to say on her carpet.

replace 'had' to 'just'

Twilight chuckled. “Sometimes makes me think life be simpler without any frien…” she cut herself off before realizing she had said that outloud. “No! I didn’t mean—”

Something*

Twilight blushed. ‘Yeah… it’s worth it… even if it ends me up in community college.”

Community college ain't bad, heading to one can be good so you can transfer to a four year college afterward. That's what I'm doing.

“And to make the best sunday ever!” Pinkie continued, “and i promise to uphold my oath to make other smile and use my powers to protect those who can’t.”

others*

“Yeah, it’s been awesome,” Rainbow continued, leaning down to stroke jeffery’s head. “All we’ve been through a lot with equestria magic, but i wouldn’t trade any of it, because it means we all get to be together in this room at this very moment, better as best friends forever.”

equestrian*

“And a big thanks to our special guest here,” dash said, giving jeffery head a noogie. “We should totally do this again next year.”

First off, Dash*
And second,

https://m.

The next thing Rainbow Dash knew, she was pushed out onto the balcony, the slide door closing with a click behind it. “Come on, guys!” Rainbow said, pounding on the door. “I didn’t mean it!” No one answered. “You’re not going to leave me here all night, in the cold… right? Still no answer, although the music inside the house had gotten louder. “At least give me my jacket!!”

You had it coming Dash.

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