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Remember kids, eat your veggies, go to school, and murder all your enemies.... I murder all my enemies....

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great read, it needs a second chapter of him getting back to town lol

Decent. It was entertaining.

I just realised who the author is.

Best

Luna certainly loves her lollipops :rainbowlaugh:

I guess his name and new job Is human treat

And then Luna stops buying from Bon Bon, giving our hapless hero his revenge.

I wonder if Luna will pay Bon Bon for keeping him

I'd love to see the guardsmares get a little TLC, got to love a mare in uniform.

Great as always, LBP. :moustache:

Amazing as always! But now I hope for another chapter, because finally Luna gets her human.

Great little story.

Keep up the great work

The Monk

Good read. Feels like there should be a second chapter, but it may or may not happen. I'm cool if it's a one chapter story.

i agree with the others this is an awesome story and could do with a second chapter

So, did you write this on 4chan and then convert it to a readable format for posting, or did you nick this? Because this was written by a dude called Love and Powerlifting.

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I'm Love and Powerlifting. I converted this for 4chan first then put it here.

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Aye, bunch of Anons in the thread confirmed it. Just checking, hate seeing work stolen. :twilightsmile:

Well hmm this was actually pretty good I'm not suprised its in the featured section

Good job cutie:moustache:

Damn!:rainbowderp:
Great damn job!!!

Luna just keeps getting hotter!:moustache:


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I too would love to see a epilogue. Maybe in the form of a letter from, Luna or Felix returning to Ponyville to say he quits because he's Luna's new man toy!:trollestia:

Not gonna lie, this is giving me ideas on how to have fun with our boyfriend... :trollestia:

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I Don't Want To Know,

So this version of Equestria is filled with sexist bitches. :rainbowlaugh:

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What? Not the non-consensual part, just the "blow him until he passes out" part. He said he's on board. :raritywink:

wanted something so sour that it made your eyes cross

No, it's supposed to be "make your mouth pucker like a cat's asshole".

An interesting take on oral. Many seem to forget that the person giving the stimulation is very much the one in control in these situations, and that control really shows in your interpretation of Luna.

Slightly less related question though: is the terseness between Bon Bon and the human more bark than bite, or do they really, actually dislike each other?

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Especially a certain intimate one. :raritywink::raritywink:

“I saw you eyeing my flank, you know,”

flank
flaNGk/
noun
noun: flank; plural noun: flanks

  1. 1.
    the side of a person's or animal's body between the ribs and the hip.
    "leaning against his horse's flanks"
    synonyms:side, haunch, quarter, thigh
    "the horse's flanks"
    -
    When did he ever look at her sides?

are these "alternative treats" anything like "alternative facts"?


Sorry, I couldn't resist

I want a good 'punishment session' with Moonbutt...

This was sweet...like. I had a great read on a stream xD. Luna has milked Anon for as much CUM as he could give. Well done!

“Canterlot? Why the hell do I need to do all the way up there?”

What the what?

Thank you Lyra! :rainbowwild:

“Felix does too, he’s just twisting your teats. Isn’t that right, Felix?”

Isn’t that your job, Bonny? :raritywink::rainbowwild:

“I ordered 48 candy canes,” she growled, all but shoving the box into the human’s face. “Instead, I appear to have 48 sticks ofblack licorice.”

Yikes! I'd be pissed off, too!

“I ordered 48 candy canes,” she growled, all but shoving the box into the human’s face. “Instead, I appear to have 48 sticks of black licorice .”

How do you fuck up that bad. Fucking come on Lyra.

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Oh, you can be assured he's not going back for a while. BonBon was quite intentional we think...

black licorice is really good though!

Interesting read, kinda wish we got to see him return to the shop, the idea of him cursing out Lyra while giving her a hug with Bon Bon looking lost as hell just sets me off, lol.

Also...

“Keep up, stallion,” Luna called over her shoulder. “I have no patience for lollygagging.”

:rainbowwild:...ironic as hell and straight up killed me...:rainbowlaugh:

MOW

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I too would love to see a epilogue. Maybe in the form of a letter from, Luna or Felix returning to Ponyville to say he quits because he's Luna's new man toy!:trollestia:

However if she keeps that up (heh), it won't be long until he's gonna be very, very sore.
So I'd rather think the letter would go like ...

Hello Bonbon,

Lyra did fuck up.
I'm being held by Luna to replace the missing shipment.
So please re-send the candies asap, and don't let Lyra pack them this time.

Felix
P.S.: Please hurry. I'd like to remind you that I'm still on overtime.

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Sup cloudy. Reminding you of this story

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