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TehSpy1


Hi! I'm sonic3186. I enjoy writing about random ships that I like! I hope to improve on my writing skills later on, and I appreciate any constructive criticism! ^-^

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Takes place directly after the MLP movie, and there will probably be references to lines at the end of the movie. You've been warned!

Tempest has been reformed, and has befriended both Twilight and her friends. She can't get over what she had done, though, and has been feeling guilt for it ever since. This, coupled with her new, unexpected and strange feelings for Twilight, leaves Tempest feeling at a loss of control. Luckily for her, though, Twilight is on hand to help her out. And maybe a bit more.

If it isn't obvious already, this story revolves around Tempest X Twilight. It contains fluff and snuggles, so enjoy! :)

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 8 )

great story Sonic!

8733334
Thank you so much! I wasn't expecting this story to get nearly as much attention as it did during the short span of time it was out. To me, though, it felt a little rushed. But that was probably me wanting to get to the fluffiness a little too quickly. xD

This is adorable. Light hearted cute and well written The pacing is nice and constant and it does not feel rushed. :twilightsmile:
I am always impressed with how much story can be crammed into less than 1500 words.

Really well done. Have a like, A fave and a follow. :pinkiehappy:

8737525
Aww~ Thank you! :3

Twilight's new name is purple

Cute little story, but too short for much character development. Wish it was longer to really flesh things out, but you earned a like.

"I love you too, Fizzlepop Berrytwist."

Even after having watched the movie a few times. From Tempest’s design it still surprises me that her name is actually Fizzlepop Berrytwist.

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