Chapter 1
Twilight skidded around a corner, wincing as she scraped her shoulder on the rough rock wall, but she managed to stay upright and continued to run. She knew it was futile. The caverns—which had turned out to be an entire changeling hive—were a maze, but running was preferable to letting the pursuing changelings catch up.
She didn't know what had happened. Somehow, her friends had disappeared, replaced by the changelings who had lured her here. The last thing she'd seen before fleeing into the depths of the hive was Queen Chrysalis herself coming for her, fire on the changeling's horn and death in her eyes.
Her mistake had become apparent when she immediately got lost; there was no escaping now that she was in the middle of an entire hive full of changelings. What she should have done was attack Chrysalis, on the slim chance that she would have been able to overpower the Queen and then somehow convince the rest of the changelings to not rip her to pieces on the spot.
So now she was running, trying to find Chrysalis and put what should have been her initial plan into action.
She came to a four-way intersection and, with no real thought, turned down the right tunnel. Almost immediately, she came flying back out, heading down the left tunnel instead. So that was what a changeling nursery looked like. She hadn't seen any infant changelings, but there had been an awful lot of grown ones, who were very upset to find an intruder in their midst.
"Where are you going, my adorable little Princess?" That sinister voice rang out from everywhere and nowhere, echoing off the tunnel walls. "Look at you, panting and gasping as you run through the corridors of my hive. Do you really think you have any chance of escaping me?"
No, thought Twilight, gritting her teeth and forcing herself to run just a bit faster. But you're not going to like what happens when I find you.
The tunnel suddenly widened into a cavern, once again filled with changelings. This time, Twilight fired up her horn, surrounded herself in a bubble of magical energy, and threw herself forward. Changelings scattered like bowling pins, and she kept moving, entering a new tunnel as she dismissed the shield. Behind her, she could hear hissing and chittering as the swarm began its pursuit.
But then, up ahead—a glimmer of light. Not the beautiful yellow glow of the sun, but the emerald flash of the Queen's magic.
Twilight swerved to one side, the deadly bolt of magic passing just inches from her ribs. She leaned to the other side, avoiding the next shot that predictably came from the opposite direction as the first. But then two shots came, nearly simultaneously, and she jumped with a flap of her wings, just barely managing to clear them.
As she landed, one of her hooves hit a rock, causing her to stumble and nearly fall flat on her face. This was a blessing in disguise, causing the next attack to pass over her head. When she came upright, she found herself at the hooves Queen Chrysalis, who—to judge by the look on her face—had not been expecting to find the alicorn so close so fast.
Twilight channeled all the magic she had into one massive blast, directly into that hateful face—
—which disappeared in a flash of green fire, revealing a changeling who smiled smugly as her attack flew several feet over its head.
Before she even had time to gasp, Chrysalis came at her from the side, a paralyzing wave of magic from her horn sending the pony crashing into a wall.
Weakly, Twilight struggled to her hooves, only able to stand halfway up. She actually managed to crawl a few feet before collapsing, right at the hooves of Chrysalis. The Queen chuckled, flipping the pony over with a push of her hoof and then planting that hoof right on her chest.
"Almost done…" Chrysalis cooed softly, bending down.
She grinned, fangs gleaming in the dim light of the cavern. That was bad enough, but she didn't stop smiling, the grin growing wider and wider until her jaw dropped open, a low hiss escaping between those deadly fangs.
Twilight watched in horror, until she realized what the Queen's intent was. She squeezed her eyes shut, turning away; if she was going to die, she refused to let her last sight be the face of her murderer.
The fangs touched her throat, clamping down, starting to pierce the skin—and then stopped as Chrysalis withdrew. Still, Twilight kept her eyes closed, quivering in fear. What could Chrysalis be planning that was worse than tearing her throat out? Surely the only thing that would stop the Changeling Queen from finishing her off right here and now was if she had come up with some even more horrible way of killing her.
Then her eyes sprang open in shock as Chrysalis sat down next to her, pulling her upright into a cuddle.
"Oh, you were so perfect, my love!" Chrysalis squealed in a disturbingly affectionate tone Twilight hadn't even known the changeling could make.
She was still trying to process the situation when Chrysalis used a hoof to stretch out one of her wings and began to preen it. Twilight stiffened up in surprise and disbelief, then began to squirm, trying to escape. Any thoughts she had of trying to flee the hive and get back to her friends dissolved as she simply tried to get out of Chrysalis's clutches and get her bearings back. But the changeling's holed hooves were like steel bands holding her in place, and Chrysalis let out a disapproving cluck.
"Hold still, dear," she said, one hoof attempting to hold Twilight steady against the cavern floor. "Your coat and feathers got mussed up in the chase, and I simply cannot have my wife looking disheveled on our wedding day!"
"Your what?! Our what?!" Shock gave Twilight the strength to break free of the changeling's grasp, and she retreated to the far wall. Chrysalis trotted after her, concern on her face, and Twilight cringed back. "Stay away! Just… just stay away and leave me alone!"
"What is the matter, Twilight darling?" asked Chrysalis plaintively. "We're married, the courtship is over. There's no reason to act like this anymore."
"Why do you keep saying we're married?!" cried Twilight, backing up until she was flattened against the wall.
"Because we are." Chrysalis took a step forward, stopping when Twilight flinched, and gave her a confused look. "I try to kill you, you try to kill me, I chase you, I beat you, and now… we're married." She let out a happy sigh. "It was so romantic… just like I'd always dreamed."
"That's your idea of romance? And a wedding?" Twilight blinked in disbelief.
"But of course. It is the traditional changeling way." Chrysalis smiled, cheeks dimpling, and gazed at Twilight shyly from under half-lidded eyes. "I'll admit, I was skeptical at first when you, a mere unicorn, started trying to court me at your brother's wedding.
"But you were magnificent! Escaping the crystal caverns under Canterlot, fighting off my drones, escaping again and freeing Cadance to foil my plan… it was like a fairy tale. And then the years that followed… I 'foalnap' your friend's sisters, you 'lock' me in a castle, I 'escape'... nothing could have been more perfect. Well, except for today."
Horror grew inside Twilight as she realized the full breadth of the misunderstanding taking place here. Somehow, through some misguided beliefs and alien changeling traditions, Chrysalis had actually fallen in love with her, and thought Twilight herself reciprocated those feelings. And now she thought they were married.
Twilight took a deep breath. "Chrysalis… Chrysalis, I wasn't, um, 'courting' you when I did all that. I was defending myself and my friends from you, for real. It wasn't some playacting disguising my true feelings."
"You... what? No, no, no," Chrysalis shook her head, a tad desperately. "Of course you were. You did everything right, your every move was in full accordance to ancient changeling courtship rituals. You followed every tradition!"
"Chrysalis, the first changeling I ever saw was you, when you revealed yourself at the wedding," said Twilight gently. "I'd never even heard of changelings before that. And I definitely didn't know any of your traditions."
"Twilight… Twilight, what are you saying?!"
"I'm saying… this was all a big misunderstanding. I wasn't trying to court you during all those times we fought. I… I don't love you, Chrysalis."
The words rang odd in Twilight's head, but the look of utter devastation on Chrysalis's face as she stumbled back took any humor out of the situation.
"You're… you're joking," Chrysalis managed to say, her voice a hoarse whisper.
"No, Chrysalis, I'm not. And I'm sorry." Twilight shook her head sadly, surprised at how sorry she actually felt. "When we fought, I was fighting for real. I was really trying to defend myself and my friends from what I thought was you trying to hurt them. I never knew what you were really doing. And… not only do I not love you, I don't even really like you. After everything you did, I thought of you as a monster."
Chrysalis didn't say anything, just lowered her head and began to weep softly. Hesitantly, Twilight moved forward, reaching out with one hoof before lowering it.
"I really am sorry," she said quietly. "And while I don't love you, I think if I got to know you, I would like you. We could be… friends."
Chrysalis looked up at her for a moment, eyes wet, then dropped her head and turned away.
"No," she croaked, body shaking. "I… I don't think I could stand that. To see you everyday, and still love you, while knowing you don't feel the same about me."
"Okay," said Twilight softly.
They stood in silence for a moment, Twilight trying not to look at the shaking Queen.
"Do you think… can I go back to my friends now?" asked Twilight finally.
"Of course," replied Chrysalis despondently, with a lackluster wave of a hoof. "I would never keep you from them. I'd never do… never do anything to hurt you."
"Okay. Thank you, Chrysalis. And… goodbye."
There was no response from the Queen, and with one look back, Twilight trotted from the cavern and back down the tunnels to the surface.
She found her friends in a clearing nearby, having the picnic they'd gone out for. The changeling that had replaced her noticed her arrival at the edge of the forest, and, making an excuse to temporarily leave the feast, made its way over to Twilight.
There was no expression on her copy's face as it passed by her, but as she prepared to step out of the cover of the trees her own voice came from behind.
"You broke her heart."
Twilight turned around, to find the now-undisguised changeling staring at her. There were a number of emotions on its face, emotions she hadn't even known changelings could have: anger, sadness, disgust. But, mostly, just a deep, deep disappointment.
Twilight opened her mouth, trying to come up with something, anything to excuse herself. But before she could find the words the changeling was gone, vanishing into the underbrush. She went back to her friends, and if they found her oddly subdued on what should have been a happy excursion, they said nothing.
Had she made the right choice? Should she have shrugged off Chrysalis's feelings like they were nothing, like they were a threat to everything she knew? Could she have at least tried to love the changeling? Given it even the slightest bit of a chance? Twilight spent many sleepless nights pondering these questions, but was never able to come up with an answer.
And in the end, it didn't matter. She never saw Queen Chrysalis, or any changeling at all, ever again.
The end
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Seeing Queen Chrysalis after clicking "Feed" was... not what I expected. But appropriate.
Well written enough for a thumbs up but slightly disappointing.
Lol,an April Fools story but a realistic one too.
I'm going to have to read the proper two stories yet again now, aren't I, to shake the sadness this one leaves behind?
I don't think I've particularly mentioned it before, by the way, so I'll also take the opportunity to say that I utterly adore how you write Queen Chrysalis
A certain amount of deviation from normal reality may be required for a story to work. That isn't necessarily a bad thing.
Well that was depressing. But then laughed to tears at the authors comments. So it balances out.
Man I can’t wait for that 1,650,000 word epic. Sounds like it’ll be a thrilling read.
Is that 23 chapters or 23 stories
I actually forgot what day it was. Thanks for reminding me.
nah, i like the original way more
April 2nd?
in Ireland at least
... that was sad.
I am sad.
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I could go down the list about how wrong you are, but I think you already know by now.
*reads story* *reads authors note*
"and THERES the april fools joke*
i remember reading changeling courtship rituals and pony courtship rituals as they came out
(moar story food needed)
Tobe honest, this is more satisfying. Chrysalis realizes she done fucked up, and removes herself from Twilight's life.
This is so much better. What I actually expected going into the first one.
Well, maybe not Chrsyie giving up so thoroughly and so quickly, but still.
Holy Jesus I love you so much. This was really well done, though I will say that I knew it was gonna happen. Still pretty good.
Needs a followup where a drunken Chrysalis cries on a bemused, but diplomatic Celestia.
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That absolutely needs to happen.
I don't get it, what does this have to do with Easter?
;p
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You stop! Chrysalis loved Twilight, and Twilight destroyed her completely!
And this is why I never listen to people who complain about lack of realism.
I'm still mad at Cadence for the end of the previous stories so...
Eeeeeehh~~~~~~~
1rst April... :v
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Shhhh, it's all going to be okay.
Honestly I kinda liked this. It could be interesting if instead of the changelings "never being seen again" Chrysalis tried to learn pony ways in secret and then woo Twilight as a pony. (Though that would make it an actual story rather than a one-off gag.)
I've seen april's fools stories/chapters/articles that made me laugh, some that left me neutral, even some that frustrated me.
But I think this is the first time I had one that just made me sad.
I'm conflicted.
So good job, I gues?
Sucks to be Chryssi. But seriously she should have known better. You hunt for eggs on Easter not purple ponies.
I know what day it is, but this actually the beginnings of a very good sci-fi twist ending story commenting on the nature of cultural context.
That... was actually pretty good, if a little short.
I think I wouldn't even mind a sort of a mixture of both stories, where Twilight would still go for, but would also act a bit more more realistically.
That was sad. Nice April Fool's prank.
Huh. I thought I knew what I was getting into when I started reading this, did not quite turn out as I expected... Still loved it though! WOO HEARTBREAK THE VILLAIN!!!
No wonder my Mother says I have no romance in my soul.
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screw romance
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Oh no this is way too sad, does this Chrysalis ever get her own happy ending?
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You have a list about...how wrong he is for enjoying the original more?
Just let people enjoy things dude.
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Nothing, yesterday was a very unique day one that apparently won't happen again for another 30 years or so I think someone said yesterday. It was Easter AND April Fools day somehow.
So I legit find this to be a far, far more interesting start of a story than the original — which, I'll admit, I gave up on after the third chapter. Everyone just acted so silly in that one, like they all knew they were just characters in a story. The style of comedy just very much wasn't for me, which sucks because I found the premise super interesting! I wanted to read a story about this premise. I wish this wasn't a gag and Chrysalis didn't just give up forever.
April second. That's what day it is. Go get a late pass.
...Austraeoh?
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It's a long ongoing joke I have with him.
Chrysalis: Twilight, we R iz mareed.
Twilight: BUCK NO!!! *BLAM BLAM BLAM!!* (Twilight has a shotgun, because she does.)
Chrysalis dies from syphilis.
The End!
Roger Ebert's review: Still a better love story than "Twilight".
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That makes more sense, it just seemed really mean spirited is all.
And this was for the best, since they were never ruined by a horribly paced, instant reformation, never getting a backstory nor any real idea how their society worked or moved or... anything really... before they were suddenly transformed into Skittles Bugs that looked like a 5-year old's idea of crossing a scarab beetle with a pony.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
So thanks to this I actually discovered your other fics, so thanks! Also, I know it's an April fools joke buuut I wouldn't mind reading a longer story that tried to continue this, just by removing the part where it says she never sees a changeling again?
I mean there's changeling divorce or changeling alimony? Imagine Celestia's court if they suddenly receive 10 barrels of goo as for twilight and are like 'whaaa? what's this for? Oh twilight is technically married but separated... to chrysalis?!??
This one may be more realistic...but I like the other one better.
Guessing it's still April first for where you are then, at least when you posted this that is.
That said, it certainly is more realistic, even if it's a shame it ends that way... Mostly because I don't think that would stop Chrysalis that easily, perhaps at first, but I'm certain she would come to the conclusion later on that if she can be misguided in such a way, that certainly the same can happen to Twilight, or that perhaps Twilight still sees her as little more then some kind of monster because of their past and decides to try and court her the pony way to see if she even can feel the same way and so forth, plenty of options there at least.
That said, it's a good joke with the end part... Or the whole story if that's the case, I almost would have believed it if not for that ity bitty line you put there at the end.
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Psst, it's a joke, moron.
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..... I didn't see when this released and feel dumb for not realizing it.