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The Man. The Legend. The World's Strongest Writer

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*Sighs*

*Adds to reads later*

Man...it really comes to something that I learn that I need to call my dad today because I'm watching a group for pony incest porn.

If that other writer would have waited, we would have 4 or 5 fics involving a mare having a paternal incestuous relationship ending with impregnation filling up the Featured box.

Huk

The tags should tell you what happens next.

Hmm, they cuddle in a completely normal, non-NSFW way? Right... :trollestia: ?

I was wondering when someone was going to do this. I guess it's fitting for Father's day today in a way.
Good read.

Anotha one? I am ok with this.

Very nice chapter. There are a few minor things you may want to edit.

All the better to pumkin your wumpkin.

You've got a typo and a missing quotation mark there.

He tail was flagged high behind her. 

Starlight tried to think of what to say without using the words buck-wild ball-slapping fuck-fest

And lastly, a missing period. (Insert pregnancy joke here)

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And lastly, a missing period. (Insert pregnancy joke here)

kek
Fixed.

I really want to see when Firelight and Jackpot meet, the conversation would be a riot.

I can't find any story called "tags" ... :applecry:

I voted for this one in the poll and I'm 100% satisfied

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"I must say, your daughter's pussy was just as tight as you said it was!"
"I was just about to say the same thing of yours."

I've gotta say.

I preferred the puns in the other one to the "sexy talk" here.

:rainbowhuh:

I love this so far and would love to see you continue this.:pinkiehappy:

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<<< The World's Strongest Writer.™

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But now go back and re-watch The Parent Map episode,
now that you know what all of those things mean.
And watch Starlight's reactions.

Best writer hahaha im going to read the trixie one immediately!

"W-what, do you expect me to- to bend you over my knee and spank you!?"

"Please?"

I laughed.

lol you are like the clop fic writing version of dwk! :rainbowlaugh:

wow a two fer a amazing pare of story's.
but now will there be a longer story picking the story line up??

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i only have one thing to say.
but pinkie can say it best.

We get a trilogy! Great job! Let's go!:moustache:

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I call it The Single Parents trilogy

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Cool. But I don't think your going to stop there? Do I smell a story to bring it all home?!:ajsmug:

Hey, not bad. 8.4k words is a lot shorter than I thought it'd be though.

I'm a really really important pony there," she said, almost convincing herself.

wow

WOW
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Some mistakes. Missing quotation marks, misspellings, etc. Eh.

I enjoyed this! It made me chuckle in all the right places and nod agreeably in all the other ones.

Only small thing I might have liked is a bit more exposition in that final scene on the station. I know the two stories link (and I enjoyed the Trixie x Jackpot story too) however I think a few more references or a bit More back and forth between the pair, maybe even Trixie quickly greeting Firelight before the train chuffs away, could have made that ending feel less like a nudge towards the other story.

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Oh! I wasn’t expecting that, but it’s a great addition! Brilliant work :D I approve

I am sad that there was no anal, or better yet a flashback to their first time doing anal. Oh well, it was still a really good story. :heart:

9020982 Maybe for next Father's Day.

"Yes. You know, how fillies and colts are different. They have different parts. And this is- this is that. Now please-"

For some reason, I heard Liam Neeson's voice when I read this bit...

Vik

Very well written. I like this pairing (Starlight x Firelight). Only part I wasn't into was the deceitful pregnancy. Not kinkshaming, unplanned/accidental/deceitful prgenancy just isn't my thing.

Favorite lines:

Starlight tried to think of what to say without using the words buck-wild ball-slapping fuck-fest.

"It's not incest if it's anal."

"She won tickets in a contest," Starlight explained. "You had to guess how many stars were in Princess Luna's mane."

"I was off by three, but I still won the grand prize!" Trixie said. "An all-expense-paid trip to Las Pegasus!"

Either that's a direct reference to Weird Al's "Albuquerque", or I'm seeing things that aren't there.

"The mare with whom you 'knock tacos'?"

9249648 I would say that this reaction is unexpected. But not from you.

"Wait, after all that, you still want to have sex with me?" she asked.

For some reason, this sounds like a little girl worried her dad's going to punish her by taking away her favorite toy. It made me laugh.

Well...at least they're both pregnant with incest babies! Daddy-baby-Daddy...Daddy. Hah.

Has a fic where all four parents have been together been written yet? Does anyone except Starlight/Trixie know that their future sons/daughters are also their little sisters? Incest is one of my fetishes...must indulge. Not a lot of Charmed incest being posted lately (well, not in the REAL Charmed universe) and almost all Supernatural sex is incest, since all the angels are related to each other, and anything else is Wincest between the brothers, with John occasionally thrown in. Seen a few where Dean ends up being his own father, but...don't like that pairing.

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