Okay, I'm adding this to my favorites despite the clop content. The rituals are too well done and satisfy my instinct to collect myths and tales of magic regardless of what kind of ritual they are. It helps that this has a good bit of humor so far too.
i love it lol i wonder at celestia's reaction when she finds out that the dark apprentice is also the faithful student. lol oh this is gonna be rich and a hoot.
Wow Celestia. Gonna end up eating crow, among other things, when you find out who the Dark Apprentice really is eh? Wait a second...... what if Celestia calls Twilight and blesses her as the Faithful Student not knowing she's already blessed. Consequently Twilight is sworn to secrecy about what she is now and would be doubly powerful. The blessings of Day and Night....... Oh sweet merciful Faust this is gonna be good!
... Well, it's pretty much predestined. Her name is Twilight, her name is the realm between the Sun and the Moon, the period before the dawn and after the sunset.
Twilight Sparkle is going to be a total badass. All the swagger and confidence Luna's going to instill in her, and whatever extra teachings Celestia gives her will likely balance that out, keep her from turning into some arrogant prick. This is going to be GOOD.
Well this certainly is auspicious. And that ending, woo. You don't know the half of it Celestia. This concept really intrigues me and I can't wait to see more. Keep it coming.
I don't always comment on Clopfics, but when I do, it's because it's warranted.
While I was thinking about the story to date in these last few minutes, I just had this picture of Celestia calmly pulling out a rather old but still in good use diary (or at least it's current volume) and simply writing:
Blessed of the Day and of the Night. I see that Celstia will reactivate the "The Faithful Student" title and teach her student more things. In the end Twilight's gonna be some bad flank swag magical demigoddess.
991123 Didn't you hear Rarity? Students are exceptionally kinky. *Points to when Twilight was Talking with Rarity.* Besides... It's always the shy or the anti-social ones that end up being extremely sensual.
991517991123 "It's always the shy or the anti-social ones that end up being extremely sensual"
This is true. I have few IRL friends, I've never had a girlfriend, have been on ONE proper date, and the second time I had sex was with a sexy busty goth girl (who was also a total weeaboo), making her cheat on her Aisan musician (hence me noting weeaboo-ness) boyfrien-- 'scuse me, FIANCEE, after them being faithful to each other for over a year.
now we just need Celestia to decide to give her blessing to twilight just to match luna... and the fun shall really be doubled! (though i assume her blessing is much less sex oriented... hopefully.)
990867 You, mother-bucker, have just aquired one of the craziest fucking readers ever. I await more writing. I expect it promptly. Do not give me reason to stalk you.
The real question here is what was Luna thinking? She must have known that Twi was already the Faithful Student, or at the very least should have been able to guess - personal protégé and all that.
Good Lord, I have a new favourite clop-mystery-politics-intrigues-fic. Very well written and damn funny at times.
I can't wait to see Twi's face when her brother tells her, completely straightforward, that the "Dark Apprentice" of princess Luna is a total whore and may or may not want to bang her.
Bloody hell Luna, that's a dick move. A really, REALLY dick move. I really doubt Twilight knows what's happened. Sounds like Luna has screwed over both Twilight AND her sister here. And not in the good way. Would Twilight have accepted if she knew she'd no longer be Celestia's? I doubt it.
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How'd you know?
BWAHAHAA!
Oh poor Celestia... how long will it take her to find out?
That's quite a dichotomy for Twilight to wrestle with.
Okay, I'm adding this to my favorites despite the clop content. The rituals are too well done and satisfy my instinct to collect myths and tales of magic regardless of what kind of ritual they are. It helps that this has a good bit of humor so far too.
i came for the pic (seriously, Luna x anypony is my weakness) but i stayed for the plot (pun intended)
i love it lol i wonder at celestia's reaction when she finds out that the dark apprentice is also the faithful student. lol
oh this is gonna be rich and a hoot.
Wow Celestia. Gonna end up eating crow, among other things, when you find out who the Dark Apprentice really is eh? Wait a second...... what if Celestia calls Twilight and blesses her as the Faithful Student not knowing she's already blessed. Consequently Twilight is sworn to secrecy about what she is now and would be doubly powerful. The blessings of Day and Night....... Oh sweet merciful Faust this is gonna be good!
This is some hot and well made stuff. I like that the sex serves a world building purpose and isn't just there for the sake of being there.
...BWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
I can not WAIT until Celestia finds out it's Twilight. The perfect Princess image, shattered like a mirror.
Oh I do hope this ends poorly in some way, just for the lols.
"Luna always picks a bit of a whore." Oh, irony! Horrible, horrible irony!
"Luna always picks a bit of a whore." I was all like "Oooohhhhh!!!" This is gonna be beautifully ironic, I'm sure.
....Celestia and Luna damn you authors...why must you make clopfics entertaining?
... Well, it's pretty much predestined. Her name is Twilight, her name is the realm between the Sun and the Moon, the period before the dawn and after the sunset.
Twilight Sparkle is going to be a total badass. All the swagger and confidence Luna's going to instill in her, and whatever extra teachings Celestia gives her will likely balance that out, keep her from turning into some arrogant prick. This is going to be GOOD.
>Luna always picks a bit of a whore.
>Twilight is new Dark Apprentice
Well... that actually seems like quite the back-handed insult to our favorite bookworm...
Well, Twilight did masturbate, so I guess the whole "Dark Apprentice seduces the Faithful Student" thing already happened...
990075 That picture is so awesome!
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So your saying... Twilight cums between the sun and the moon...
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This is absolutely epic! I just hope it isn't too long before the next chapter is released.
That's gonna be awkward once Celly finds out the truth...
Well this certainly is auspicious. And that ending, woo. You don't know the half of it Celestia. This concept really intrigues me and I can't wait to see more. Keep it coming.
>>Implying Celestia doesnt know whats going on and isnt simply Trollestia
"She always picks a bit of a whore."
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Still not enough Rainbow LOLZ for how hard I laughed
Hmm.... Interesting.
I don't always comment on Clopfics, but when I do, it's because it's warranted.
While I was thinking about the story to date in these last few minutes, I just had this picture of Celestia calmly pulling out a rather old but still in good use diary (or at least it's current volume) and simply writing:
"It begins... again..."
Anyway, damn good show so far.
That ending... omg!
There are no images good enough to describe the amount of lulz i just had
Whatever comes next is gonna be good.
Whoooore---><---Whoooore
hehe, i love this! what will twi do? have sex with herself? what shock will this bring to good ol' celly?
i love this so much...please keep writing
is it possible to be a faithful student and a dark apprentice at the same time? I GOTS TA KNOW THESE THINGS
Uhm... Nope. You are probably a good writer, but I don't like clopfics one bit. So that's already a no for me.
Ooooh Celestia's gonna be piiiiissed.
Oh Luna you mean mare.
Shouldn't have skimped out on the rituals there Celly.
Celestia just called her own student a whore...... you just made my day.
Blessed of the Day and of the Night. I see that Celstia will reactivate the "The Faithful Student" title and teach her student more things. In the end Twilight's gonna be some bad flank swag magical demigoddess.
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Didn't you hear Rarity? Students are exceptionally kinky. *Points to when Twilight was Talking with Rarity.*
Besides... It's always the shy or the anti-social ones that end up being extremely sensual.
ZE AH MAH GAHD
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"It's always the shy or the anti-social ones that end up being extremely sensual"
This is true. I have few IRL friends, I've never had a girlfriend, have been on ONE proper date, and the second time I had sex was with a sexy busty goth girl (who was also a total weeaboo), making her cheat on her Aisan musician (hence me noting weeaboo-ness) boyfrien-- 'scuse me, FIANCEE, after them being faithful to each other for over a year.
Followed by the third and fourth time.
now we just need Celestia to decide to give her blessing to twilight just to match luna... and the fun shall really be doubled! (though i assume her blessing is much less sex oriented... hopefully.)
Gay clop with.... Twilight in it? Ewww
well this is interesting, despite the clop you have gained my notice, i hope the rest is as good as it has been so far
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I am now watching this. Do not dissapoint.
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You, mother-bucker, have just aquired one of the craziest fucking readers ever. I await more writing. I expect it promptly. Do not give me reason to stalk you.
MOAR!!!
The real question here is what was Luna thinking? She must have known that Twi was already the Faithful Student, or at the very least should have been able to guess - personal protégé and all that.
God I hate waiting for new chapter but I guess it will be worth the wait
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Dudebro, the shots will fly.
OOOOHOHOO, THE IRONY
Good Lord, I have a new favourite clop-mystery-politics-intrigues-fic. Very well written and damn funny at times.
I can't wait to see Twi's face when her brother tells her, completely straightforward, that the "Dark Apprentice" of princess Luna is a total whore and may or may not want to bang her.
As the saying goes
This just got twenty percent cooler!
In the 'epic story plot' kind of way (well, both ways really).
amazing chapter can't w8 for the next one
words cannot describe the laughs i had at >Luna usually picks a bit of a whore.
And i'm willing to bet having both blessings instantly makes twilight the pony equivalent of Kratos in all but blood lust....well...maybe.
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Not child-ish. Hyperactive. She's all about physical sensation, active 'fun'. Sex would come naturally to her interests.
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That ending lol. Sooo I guess this means twilight is going to go fuck herself....dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
Bloody hell Luna, that's a dick move.
A really, REALLY dick move. I really doubt Twilight knows what's happened.
Sounds like Luna has screwed over both Twilight AND her sister here. And not in the good way.
Would Twilight have accepted if she knew she'd no longer be Celestia's? I doubt it.
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Oh, I'm pretty sure she knew. That's why she said not to tell Celestia.