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An Intricate Disguise


Selling out has never felt so dirty.

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I'd recognise those moans from anywhere...

You are fantastic

Damn, I wish you had chosen a different chapter title :/ Would've been hilarious to see that at the end.

Well done in general my dude.

I really think you should do more stories based off these characters. A third one, where he finally gets to do her in her pussy. I enjoyed it, keep up the good work!!!😎😎😎

Another Great Work as always! I guess vaginal would be just as Fun for them.

Oh, fuck, was she? Because seeing as how that wasn't the case whatsoever, how was she going to react when she found out? Jason was finding it even more difficult to speak whilst laying down, the pain becoming almost impossible to produce sound through, so he simply raised a finger and tried to draw Minuette's attention, but she was having none of it.

You switched his name from jeremy to jason here. Just a heads up :twilightsmile:

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Thanks for that! You've got a good eye!

I love the playfulness these two share!

Thanks for posting.

I love the blunt honesty of the synopsis.

The fic was good too.

Marry that mare. She makes puns and does anal.

The fact that a semi-utopia like Equestria doesn't have universal dental insurance is taking me out of this story more than the fact that one of the characters is a magical talking horse. :derpytongue2:

Minuette only pointed a hoof down at her ass, still filled with both his cock and his seed. "You're not getting your deposit back," she breathed, moving forwards and kissing him on the nose, and in that moment he knew that Minuette may have been an incredible fuck, but she told the most lousy jokes he'd ever heard.

Eeyup :eeyup:.

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I second that! You only get pussy when she gets a ring, and she really is a fun, lovable, sexy firecracker!:moustache:

What kind of pony name is Jeremy? :rainbowhuh:

I hope you don't mind me pointing out some typos that I've noticed.

Jeremy had taken your eyes off of Minuette's actions for a moment,

I think that should have been a "his".

The was she blinked at him with those round, inviting eyes,

"way".

Anyway, it was a good read. Looking forward to the eventual future sequel of this fic. :pinkiehappy:

Great work! Glad to have another story with these two characters! :twilightsmile:

Will there be a 3rd? I'm excited to see more :pinkiehappy:

whole place feel like a steralised, too clean nightmare.

sterilized

The was she blinked at him with those round

way

Well that Equestria doesn' t have omnicomprensive health care is REALLY strange ^^;;;

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You're automatically prescribing American English there.

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Ok... but sterAlised is still wrong ^^

Comment posted by Rainbow slash123 deleted Mar 21st, 2019

Damn, I think I fell in love with the Minuette's character

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