A human wakes up in a forest to discover he has been given powers that he quickly uses for his protection. Then attempts to blend in with locals there without raising suspicion to recover his past.
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8th of June.
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What
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Next release date is June 8th. I made a schedule and I am gonna try to stick to it.
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Ok then thank mah men
I'm loving the story so far
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I hope I can keep it that way.
When next AWESOME chapter!?
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I finished editing the next one, but I'm sticking to a schedule so I can pace myself. I will normally be posting on the 8th and 21 of each month, at around noon. So hold on, my fellow humans and equines!
8th of June!?!
What. The. Hell.
That’s longer than 99% of the authors I know take to write, edit, and post a chapter. Most authors are like “I’ll post a chapter every two to three weeks, and if not that then I’ll post the next chapter whenever I can.”
My god that’s either a huge gap between chapters, especially ones so short, or your underestimating yourself in your skill of writing. If you’ve already got the next chapter done, then why make people wait? Most people on this site will literally take like seven minutes to read this chapter entirely before moving on, Like I did. I love this story and, quite frankly, think that the gap is a little too big.
These chapters aren’t the larget I’ve ever seen, and I’ve seem authors post larger chapters more quickly because they are either a skilled writer or put a lot of time of their day into the story.
I understand having real life, because I have a story on Hiatus(Won’t be for long because schools out.). But the skill at which you write tells me two things.
1) You’re a really good writer, and want to pace yourself with a strict schedule, like you said.
2) You likely had some sort of pacing trouble before(?).
I mean, I’m no person to judge, but the gap just seems a little too long.
Anyways, that was my rant for the day, onto the chapter.
It was a good one, shows a bit of his personality, and that he’s rather bad with women. A typical, yet unique character. Hope to see more of him!
There was maybe a little too many characters introduced this chapter. Say, Nether, Silver, and the Mare were all fine, but the mystery character at the last bit of the chapter was a bit too much. Too many plot elements, not enough time between them. I am in the process of completely re-writing my own story so it’ll be less of a randomly thrown together mess. This chapter is a really good one, clean and well organized.
To be honest though, the best part of the chapter was when the branch he was holding onto broke, and the squirrel with the walnuts fell onto his head while he was talking about trying to take one... Pretty hilarious Irony I must say.
Typing in a moving car on a phone while said car is bouncing is really hard, by the way.
Finally done with the Graduation Ceremony. It was over 100° out here... And I am going home to a nice cold drink of ice water and a nap, because I woke way too early.
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It's not that I have trouble pacing myself, It's the fact that I want the other readers to, oh what the hell. I just want people to enjoy it. Looks like I have to re-think the schedule. Sorry, I'm quite new with people actually reading my stuff. That and I have short chapters.
And don't worry about the mystery character. They'll be revealed in chapter 9.
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Ah okay.
Who was blowing chunks?
Pretty good story so far, but I ask why at the end they were so suspicious towards our human turned alicorn? I mean all he did was talk with some mares and then get led around the town?
My god, the fic is good BUT the protagonist is a combination between an autist and an 80’s stereotypical nerd.
My only question is Why ?
On the other hand, he’s the funniest mofo I’ve ever seen.
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I agree, for some reason I feel like when Nightmare Moon arrives, he's going shout yeet and throw the brick at her