A tough apology

Sunset Shimmer6,765 stories ·4,929 members

This story is a sequel to An argument

After a heated argument, Rainbow realises that friendship is more valuable than any popularity status or number of fans. The only problem now, is if she can fix the broken bonds that she has made.

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Speedo

Speedo #1 · Oct 30th, 2018 · · ·

I think it's fine?

Xenont

Xenont #2 · Oct 30th, 2018 · · ·

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To be fair, I was terrified that it is not allowed to have two separate chapters in two separate stories, so I thought if i realesed it on the same day, it's fine?

That Little Writer

That Little Writer #3 · Oct 30th, 2018 · · ·

Loved it!

I knew Dashie could make things right.

Dr Mysterious Shade

Dr Mysterious Shade #4 · Nov 5th, 2018 · · ·

She stood up to leave just as Rainbow walked in through the doors. "After all, it looks like the performance is over, so we can walk past the stage without bothering poor Rainbow."
Just then, the doors to the shop swund open, revealing a certain rainbow haired girl.

You said the same thing twice here. You need to decide which instance you're going to use.

RDrules

RDrules #5 · Feb 21st, 2019 · · ·

I've read a lot of good books, and I must applaud you for all your stories. You truly have the makings of a truly incredible writer.

Sunset Awesomness17

Sunset Awesomness17 #6 · Feb 26th, 2019 · · ·

Awesome! Great job!

MixMassBasher

MixMassBasher #7 · Feb 10th, 2020 · · ·

I think its better off combined like a chapter one and two.

midnight_shimmer1

midnight_shimmer1 #8 · Apr 21st, 2021 · · ·

Well it did end good at the end!

EncoreP

EncoreP #9 · Jun 29th, 2021 · · ·

"I'm not a band....I'm not a...." Rainbow's eyes widened. "A one-man band...." She looked towards the stage and gasped. "My friends! Ohh, what would I do???" She thought of all the things that she had done to them. "How would I make it up? How?" With that thought, Rainbow ran from the stage and into her house.

I can give you a solution, Dash: Go bring your entire collection of Daring Do and guitars, and just tear, break, destroy and/or burn them!

ScisetShimmerEvan

ScisetShimmerEvan #10 · Jan 9th, 2022 · · ·

"She broke your guitar for crying out loud!" Applejack said. "You can't just forgive her!"

It can always be repaired or she just buys a new one/replaced.

"Well, I did break your new guitar, so I...kinda decided to give you my new one. To say sorry...."

I still think my option was better but this'll do.

"Yes!" Pinkie said. "Everyone deserves a second chance. "And you came to apologise and won up to our mistakes! That means that you are still worthy of my friendship!" Rainbow smiled.

Yep, she's right.

"And I don't mind writing songs for the band every once in a while, I do enjoy it very much. But I can't write one every other day, as long as you give me time, I wouldn't mind."

Which is exactly what she needs. Time and patience.

"I guess I did get way way too carried away..." Rainbow said. "Just because of fans and popularity, I neglected those who helped me to get there, my friends."

Ya think!