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Shadowlight Wanderer


I am a wanderer through darkness and light, who wants to live good life and finally have some friends. My favourite pony is Luna, and my ships are Fluttercord and Sparity.

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Spike was utterly devastated. He failed miserably, once again, to impress Rarity with the gift. So on the brink of desperation, he sang a song, where he tried to simply apologize for not being able to do something right for a wonderful friend. Rarity showed him her gratitude with a sweet kiss, which was more than he could dream of. But what if such a simple gesture as an improvised song could mean more than he anticipated ? After the party Spike, recollecting his thoughts and trying to figure out the answer to the mysterious mess in the party room , finds something as simple and yet so meaningful as his very own song. Will it lead to the resolution or confusion ?

My first attempt at one-shot. Sparity shipping included. Sorry, not so sorry ;)

Though story focuses mainly on Spike and Rarity, thus making them main characters, the other characters present on the party will appear (Twilight, Pinkie, Applejack, Fluttershy, Dash, Shining Armor, Cadence, Discord and Flurry Heart.) Most of them is tagged accordingly. And I suppose I should also tag it Mystery but...choices :((Read: lack of tags).

Rated T cause of minor suggestive fragments and...because it is always better to rate slightly higher for safety reasons. But as you will see nothing besides those few lines.

Enjoy the story

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 8 )

Yay for the best Rarity ship and the 3rd best ship in the whole fandom :yay: :moustache::raritystarry::yay:

Very well done buddy :) This was a nice quick pleasant read.

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Thank You for the pleasant words, have a wonderful year. It was nothing much but I am quite glad from the effect. Normally I write much longer stuff. Within next two weeks, I plan to weite one more one shot, with Celestia, Luna, and Discord, more dramatic than this one. Thanks for reading !

:fluttercry: I want a sequel!!! This was so sweet my teeth hurt.

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I am working on two next parts now, they should be up within 2 months

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It is a romantic alegory. It means that even if Rarity is just one of the millions of ponies in the eyes of the world and society, for Spike she IS the entire world. This was the point that Spike expressed in his song

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