This story is a sequel to For the world, just you. For me, the entire world.
The second part in "Love of Fate" series
ADDITIONAL TAGS: SLICE OF LIFE, RANDOM, "UPLIFTING".
Rarity couldn't be happier. Business prospering without an error, a lot of time with her friends and Spike, who became hundred times more cheerful since he received her letter. All of these circumstances was more than enough to fill the heart of the white unicorn with joy and giddiness.
Spike was visiting her quite frequently, always eager to help out or just exchange a few words. Rarity enjoyed his company and didn't regret her promise to him even for a moment.
But one time, she noticed something lingering in Spike's eyes. Something sad within his gaze that was not there before.
Rarity feels that this may be her first step in being as reliable to Spike as he is to her. She won't have any of her friends be hurt in front of her eyes.
But in order to do so, they both must unravel their hearts and get to know each other even more...while keeping their emotions under the control...till the time comes...
(Because of the lack of blue tags, I made a new one. It is called: "Uplifting" cause it is what the story is about. I am sorry if the tag comedy is far fetched but without it the description looks like all of those depressing sadfics and this is not supposed to be like that ) PLEASE GIVE ME FEEDBACK IF THE TAGGING IS RIGHT IN YOUR OPINION ( THIS IS FRUSTRATING, WHY THERE ARE ONLY 3 TAGS ALLOWED ?)
I OWN ONLY THE STORY ITSELF. ALL MY LITTLE PONY: FRIENDSHIP IS MAGIC, INCLUDING THE WORLD OF EQUESTRIA AND ALL ASSOCIATED CHARACTERS BELONG TO HASBRO. I ALSO DON'T OWN ANY OF THE ART AND AUDIO PRESENTED ALONGSIDE THIS STORY. I HAVE NO INTENTION OF USING IT AS MY OWN CREATION AND I MAKE SURE THAT IT WILL BE ACREDITED PROPERLY IN THE INDEX BELOW AND IN AUTHOR'S NOTES IN THE ORDER OF APPERANCE. ALL THE DRAWINGS, SONGS AND EXTERNAL ADDINGS BELONG TO THE RESPECTIVE ARTISTS
(The list provided in the last chapter)
This was a very sweet story, I enjoyed it!💖
Not sure if Spike/Rarity will happen or not when the show ends but you can see how much their relationship have grown during the course of the show. In the latest episode *Between Dark & Dawn* at the first few minutes when that big turtle almost eats Spike you can see Rarity calling him by his nickname plus helping him clean up that slobber gunk off him when the princesses *saved the day*
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I am so glad you found a story enjoyable. Be sure to like it if you did. I also don't know how Sparity will end but with all the hints, I am sure we willget SOMETHING.
I love me some Sparity
I always thought Spike and Rarity complement each other, It's like you said "Spike and Rarity are in constant struggle between giving and taking, as a dragon and Element of Generosity. Spike is helpful to everyone yet has to control dragon's natural greed. Rarity is naturally generous, but tends to manipulate ponies and Spike to get what she wants. I believe that being together, they learn from each other."
That and I just love them together lol Spike is so under used, It's one of the reasons I found this site, some of the stories I've red here about him and Rarity are just great, I would love them to be together in the show(Ent gonna happen.) But thats why we have sites like this
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Thank You so much❤, it means a lot to me and the comfort of the reader is something very important in my work. I made sure that the songs and the general setting would enrich the atmosphere.
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😁👍❤ I LOVE Discord.
He learned from Spike that love is about spying in the bushes. He applied it here🤩😏
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I am so glad that you liked it and hope that you find the rest of the story enjoyable as my theorizing. Also, I love the fact that you like to use Fimfiction for Sparity stories. I love the site for various reasons but people here ARE so taleneted and some stories are just beautiful. I like to read them when I relax.
I enjoyed that, Thanks
Good story, the only question I have now is this, sequel? lol I'd love to see where it goes from here, maybe have them talk to there friends and family, or be a bit more intimate with one another and just see where the story goes from here. maybe a wedding/kids at the end hahaha
Either way thanks for the story, keep up the great work, I loved how you wrote Spike and Rarity in this story.
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hahaha so true, I love to read great stories, I can't tell you how many times I've found a good story(Mainly Sparity lol) on this site and before I know it, it's 4am hahaha
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Well, it is not said that I will stop here❤I really like working with Spike and Rarity so I will probably get to it shortly if this story will be liked by others as well. Thank you kindly for your feedback😋
And yes, this is a sequel. I constructed the story so it is not nessecary to know it but if you give it a read in a future, I will be happy to hear your opinion on this and future stories.
One question from me, did you like art and music I picked. It is my first time crafting story with addtions you know
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Also, you just give me an interesting idea for the next part. Thank you ! This is why I love talking to people here. One minute and inspiration strikes !
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Hi Shadowlight wanderer, firstly "And yes, this is a sequel. I constructed the story so it is not nessecary to know it." Yeah I read the other story when it came out, infact thats how I found this story as I went back to read "For the world, just you. For me, the entire world" and found you released this one, so of course I had to read it lol(so glad I did) it was poor writting on my part, was asking if this story was going to have a sequel, but you answered that already lol
to answer your question about the art and music picked. I really liked it and it all worked well with the story I felt, I'm not the best at describing this sort of stuff lol but I think it all aided in how they felt at the time and made it more I don't want to say real(cuz they are cartoons) lol but helped the story along, sorry if that didn't help
"Also, you just give me an interesting idea for the next part. Thank you ! This is why I love talking to people here. One minute and inspiration strikes !" I know what you mean, you can read a comment and then bam, idea!!! lol so glad I sort of helped hahaha look forward to whats to come
**** Note, I thought I was following you, as I've replyd to your post on sparity forums afew times lol turns out I wasn't, guess thats why I didn't know about the Sequel, just changed that hahaha I also got round to releasing my first story,(it's finished, just last few chaps in editing) Give it a read if you want,put it in spoiler tags cuz I didn't want it to look like i was trying to get people to read my story hahaha but I'd love to hear what you think
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Thank you so much, I am very glad you enjoyed it. You can also say about it to others, maybe someone will have a pleasant read too. I wish you everything best😁
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🤣My Celestia !!!Nice one
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Poor Ember. Damn that's tough.
This is probably my favorite Sparity shipping, to date. That includes the previous story as well