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Humans are being brought to Equestria unwillingly. They're small in this world, and are treated as food. Mocha Sprinkles prefers to observe humans on their home world. One day she accidentally brings a human to her living room.
His name is Cody.
Warning: contains vore elements
I would like to thanks Pon-e for letting me use his character Mocha Sprinkles. Also for helping me with story elements, as I know nothing about mlp. Another thanks to Schadenfreude for the cover art.
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This was really great!
"Humans are being brought to Equestria unwillingly. They're small in this world, and are treated as food."
...What?
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i hope that means something good
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thanks!
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I decided to go weird for my first story
A random Changeling looks up at the sky and says “ what is the that”. As a metal cylinder is heading directly towards them. The human that the changeling is holding suddenly screams out. “ The Holy nuclear fire is coming to kill us all!”
Damn, plot twist!
Why leave it hanging is there a part two
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thanks
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surprise!
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turns out humans don't like being invaded
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possibly. my knowledge of mlp is severely limited (everything I know is because of my good friend gmodpon-e). I also plan on writing a non mlp book to publish sometime next year.
I won't deny how much fun writing this was. There is the possibility I will make a sequel if pon-e and I can get a decent idea. unlike the current CoC, I would upload as I work. There is also the possibility of making one off stories between projects.
This is why I really dislike this story, or at least why I feel the third chapter makes it downvote-worthy for me. Celestia never gives a good reason for suddenly trying to save humanity, and never seems to give more than an once of actual care. She never really acknowledges that these eaten humans are digested, as in dead. I'm not sure if it's better that this was mentioned in the story but not actually explained, rather than believing that this could have just been some kind of oversight or something. That she cared about some disease that affected her ponies more than the fact that only those affected were the ones who probably had killed dozens by that point, if not more. At most, it seems like she doesn't want the changelings to come back from Earth later and take over Equestria, or maybe just because some poem said so. I don't know if it's intentional that I ended up wholeheartedly agreeing with Cody's whole "instinct and subconscious thoughts" rant, the one he made before going to Chrysalis. Actually, I was half expecting a second twist where Chrysalis just became the good guy, just by deciding to not be as bad as the ponies.
Point is, I don't think there's enough thought given by Celestia or the ponies in general, about how ponies eating, killing, and digesting literally countless amounts of humans could ever be just something that happens. This is especially so when it's fully known that humans have the same kinds of intelligence, feelings, dreams, families, etc. as ponies, but are instead essentially treated like walking drugs by many.
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thanks for the feedback. The magic part felt kinda forced. tbh it was an idea I had while very much not sober
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in all honesty, i had no fleshed out plan for the story. I threw stuff together to see what sounded good in the moment