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For some reason, John Smith decided buying a mystery box off the deep web was a good idea. All it had was some pencils, a sharpener, a journal, and this crystal with a note saying "charge crystal with sunlight". After he accidentally dropped the crystal, the man found himself in a strange, dark forest. At least he can document his day to day life until he can find a way out of this strange new world.
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John Smith...
Where have I heard that name?
...
Doctor Who!?
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lol. tbh I wanted a name for the character, and Anon felt overused
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me too. Writing the story from the journal's perspective is a challenge
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I look flrward to it
10948411
Try Pocahantas I think.
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I didn't want to use Anon as a name. John Smith is another moniker of an anonymous individual.
10973197
Well at least it sounds like a real name. Sometimes I hate that other name. And very few of the stories are that good in my opinion. So far this human story is pretty good.
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Thank you.
10973197
I thought it was John Doe, not Smith. How exactly do you access the deep web?
10981117
I don't. Am normie. Guess I am wrong. Oh well.
Heh.
10994234
heh
What why? She brought it all on herself? If it was me I wouldn't dream of going anywhere near her again. He has nothing to feel bad about, but no he must quickly forgive her without making her have to work for it because cliche.
11007497
Your name isn't John Smith
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And I am glad I'm not him if he is going to feel bad and instantly forgive someone for needlessly giving him hell
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It's my story and I'll write it how I want to.
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And I will leave a review criticizing it how I see fit. Free speech works both ways pal.
11008538
Ok?
Will chrysalis army will take him back while hearing the princess have him
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Spoilers
maybe. i have a plan. kind of
Is that why there's no genre tags?
Unfortunately she forgot that for all their differences their was a lot they had in common and she had been respectful of him and been honest and instead trying to treat him like a science experiment and then cheated on her apology she wouldn't have lost a possible friendship.
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mhm
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life teaches many lessons
Hopefully this time she can remember empathy and to think before she acts.
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here's hopin
if the story is done you should mark it as complete.
11071587
I knew I was forgetting something. Thanks
Did she really have to claim him though, couldn't she just call the whole thing off from the get go and have guards enforce her orders for those that refuse to listen? Why go along with it to end it and make the solution more complicated than it should be?
11088614
not a clue. This story was written on the fly with no planning. Pretty much every inconsistency happened because I was thinking on the spot
11088614
Considering how crazy they got since twilight opened her mouth and she was supposed to be learning about friendship maybe lesson on empathy should been included.
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probably
Me encantó.
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Gracias.
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De nada.
Might wanna check that by the way
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That must've been a best tip for writers ✍️
Words
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I know it's wrong. That was the point.
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I figured it more a commentary onbmy writing