I like cats and ponies cuz they are fluffy! Come and talk if you want, I won't bite.
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I liked it. A pretty good balance of sexy and cute. Nicely done!
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Thank you.
I agree with the first guy, definitely a good balance. It was very pleasant, and surprisingly wholesome for clop when it came to Dash's pep talk and help.
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Still excellently written.
Nice job again man.
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Is it weird that seeing such a cute and vanilla fic that sticks to existing characterisations is a welcome breath of fresh air instead of the norm?
I bet Fluttershy would love for Braeburn to do that!!!
I think that "rainbow whispered in a sultry tone" would have worked better as it is less choppy and flows better. Feel free to let me know if you ever need help with editing.
This was nice. Cute and sexy.
While reading this I imagined treehugger in place of RD. Hope that's ok
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Not at all, it would have been a pretty good choice for this scenario as well.
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How much to comission a story of fluttershy and treehugger getting it on
Nice story. Fits Fluttershy but is a bit to tame for me i guess... No after snuggels