You need to learn proper punctuation so your paragraphs aren't one big runoff sentence.

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cheers for the info I’ll try and make them shorter

*humph* nice the caribou gets what they deserves

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some are going to die but that is obvious

You could just add a period before the end quote for a start.

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I can't wait for King dainn to get beat up by the females caribou

First rule of writing a story.. NEVER use pics/gifs to describe what's happening, instead try to describe it in words. Some people prefer to read about it, not look at it.

i like this story already, also pleas have one of them hock up cadence?

I've been wanting to try DMC for years, but I keep getting hooked on everything else. DMC 1-4 in a bundle are I think $20 on Xbox and 5 built up a good hype so I'll probably buy that eventually. I at least know the order thanks to a friend and get the basic jist of it so I really want to see how Vergil (child abusive asshole) acts in this.

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I had plans for Gleaming Shield and Cadence to herd with him

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I put the image because when ever I try to describe it, it become nonsense so the image is easier

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Then you should practice and learn, otherwise you'll get dislikes due to the errors i've pointed out, forgive me if I annoy you.

Get an editor, that's all i can say, otherwise, this could be pretty enjoyable

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you know your stuff :)

Yeah, you need an editor, that or go over what you write once or twice before publishing. Just going to point out a few changes you could make.

“That traitor has come back to this world and shall pay for helping that bitch god Faust putting me in here I’M COMING TO KILL SPARDA”

Put a period before "I'm coming to kill Sparda", add a 'you' between 'kill' and 'Sparda'.

As the scientist of his royal highness King Diann they began Project Summoning this project is for the the plans to rule Equestria Diann has planned to rule it ever since he became king right now he was standing in front of the portal but a few feet away as to not be harmed

The scientists of his royal highness King Diann began to initiate Project Summoning. This project has the simple purpose of assisting the king in his quest to rule Equestria and correct it's many problems by summoning obedient, otherworldly creatures to ensure victory. Diann has planned to rule it ever since he became king and right now he was standing in front of the portal but a few feet away as to not be harmed.

A little help from a guy with a murder of crows and an obsession with scythes.

way to go King Diann you thought you can control three powerful warriors as soon as they arrive pffft no.

Is this DMC: Devil May Cry a.k.a. Reboot Dante, Devil May Cry a.k.a. Original Dante, or a composite version (Both versions combined)?

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they are the dante, vergil and nero from dmc 5 but have some of the weapons from the other games

*<>* this story is a wreck ...

I like the story dude

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Me too

Love the idea, it's hard to read, no offense. Please consider thinking about more details to put in and make sure you like the way it sounds before publishing. I'm not saying that you DIDN'T do that, just offering friendly advice. I will still read this though.

Looks fantastic

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

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soon I'm just starting a new chapter

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Yeay

I like it man u should keep going