Scootaloo finally gets a chance to meet the band she's been idolizing for years. You can guess what happens when they invite her back to their suite to ‘hang out’, though.
Wow! This story is great! Keep up the good work!
Damn what a build up! Amazing way to get the reader going.
10041225Of course I will! ^.^
“So,” Apple Bloom said conspiratorially, “rock paper scissors?”
Nani? How do you do that with hooves?
Awesome work well done, well done!
10042065
lol, I dunno. Ask Pinkie Pie. Or maybe Lyra.Heh, or maybe all ponies just always choose ‘rock’.
10042104
Heh, or maybe all ponies just always choose ‘rock’.
But seriously, with FIVE stallions to satisfy, I hope she's a fast learner. She's gonna be sore.
10046030Oh, I think Chapter 2 settles that. ^.^
Great first chapter. Really set the tone very well, and drew you in to the world that Scootaloo was going through.
Scoots and the band stayed in character very well throughout the whole chapter.
I like how you hinted at the band possibly playing in Ponyville, and how they might take up Scoots offer to hang out with the other CMC.
First chapter is definitely a 9/10
My favorite part is the fact that they were playing Them’s Fightin’ Herds. I love that game.
10047629^.^ Of course! What other in-universe MLP game would they play?
Like a slumber party?
Yes. You will be partying. In a fashion. When ponies typically sleep. Enjoy.
Wow! This story is great! Keep up the good work!
Damn what a build up! Amazing way to get the reader going.
10041225
Of course I will! ^.^
Nani? How do you do that with hooves?
Awesome work well done, well done!
10042065
lol, I dunno. Ask Pinkie Pie. Or maybe Lyra.
Heh, or maybe all ponies just always choose ‘rock’.
10042104
But seriously, with FIVE stallions to satisfy, I hope she's a fast learner. She's gonna be sore.
10046030
Oh, I think Chapter 2 settles that. ^.^
Great first chapter. Really set the tone very well, and drew you in to the world that Scootaloo was going through.
Scoots and the band stayed in character very well throughout the whole chapter.
I like how you hinted at the band possibly playing in Ponyville, and how they might take up Scoots offer to hang out with the other CMC.
First chapter is definitely a 9/10
My favorite part is the fact that they were playing Them’s Fightin’ Herds. I love that game.
10047629
^.^ Of course! What other in-universe MLP game would they play?
Yes. You will be partying. In a fashion. When ponies typically sleep. Enjoy.