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dirty little secret
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Well done. This was a seamless, easy, searing hot read.
Favorite moment was when Scootaloo was down low with tail high looking at the games. Stunning visual.
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Thanks! ^.^ It’s always great to know what parts people liked the most! That lets me know to do that kind of thing more in the future!
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Awesome story
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Sequel?
Ho boah.
I hope to god you're planning a sequel
Wow! This story is great! Keep up the good work!
Damn what a build up! Amazing way to get the reader going.
And here I thought they were fucking her in the ear.
Masterpiece written by a most marvelous Author. The build up was awe inspiring and the action was breath robbing.
A good story for everyones favorit Bookshelf
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So far not likely ... unless it’s commissioned again.
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???
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Nah, that’s that other story that was in the feature box lately. What was it called, ‘mental stimulation’ or something like that?
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Thanks! ^.^
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Of course I will! ^.^
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My apologies.
That's my retarded way of saying 'Damn, that's really good' when I'm incapable of words and I'm only able to make sounds. You have a clean, concise, and evocative prose that I admire.
~ Yr. Pal, B
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^.^ I kind of expected as much, but I wasn’t sure.
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I think it was called
Once You Go Black, You Go Deaf
Nani? How do you do that with hooves?
Awesome work well done, well done!
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lol, I dunno. Ask Pinkie Pie. Or maybe Lyra.
Heh, or maybe all ponies just always choose ‘rock’.
Man, I hope to have some spare money to commission ya one day, you do some amazing shit.
Nicely done my dude, nicely done.
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Patreon supporters get discounts!
But even with all the money in the world, my waiting list is obscenely long.
Speaking of which, I should probably get back to work on that...
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Perhaps one day I'll become a Patreon, when I can afford the $50 slot for that sweet 90% discount
lul
Like all your storys this was fucking epic
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I try. ^.^ What’s your favorite part?
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Yeah, keeping it fresh through a long scene like that is one of the hardest parts!
OMG, sequel please! This was great
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I usually don’t do sequels for commissions unless it’s requested by Patreon or another commission...
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Aww, ok. There's definitely room for one with the other crusaders, but thanks anyways!
Dude, that hit all the kinks. The way you described her arousal, and the way that it all came together in the end. Top notch.
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But that’s just because I’m a professional. 
Thanks! ^.^ Though I’m sure I could come up with a few kinks that aren’t in this story!
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Pfff, I meant like all *my* kinks. But yeah, you are an idol to aspire to. Just uh, don't expect me to suck your dick lol.
I'm not Scootaloo...
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Damn ... I’m in the wrong line of work.
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But seriously, with FIVE stallions to satisfy, I hope she's a fast learner. She's gonna be sore.
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Oh, I think Chapter 2 settles that. ^.^
Can't wait for the sequel.
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Well, yes, you literally can’t. Because so far, there’s no plan for a sequel to be coming...
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That's a shame, would have loved to have Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle join in on the fun.
Great first chapter. Really set the tone very well, and drew you in to the world that Scootaloo was going through.
Scoots and the band stayed in character very well throughout the whole chapter.
I like how you hinted at the band possibly playing in Ponyville, and how they might take up Scoots offer to hang out with the other CMC.
First chapter is definitely a 9/10
Well now that was really something.
You really teased us over and over again with the pacing of the chapter. Writing such a lengthy clop and keeping it feeling fresh and exciting is very impressive.
The visual aspect was so well done I almost felt like I was Scoots throughout the whole experience after the first few chapters.
chapter 2 is 10/10. overall story is a 9.75/10 with a golden seal of approval.
My favorite part is the fact that they were playing Them’s Fightin’ Herds. I love that game.
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Am I wrong for wanting to know what that missing 0.25 is for?
I’m always looking for ways to improve, and to me, that looks like room for improvement!
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^.^ Of course! What other in-universe MLP game would they play?
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Well I would say it not as impactful as some other work of yours. Doesn't mean it's not good but it's missing something to push it into the great bar. However you I'm all about the inner meaning of a story and how they feel even after the story ends. Everything is just kinda to the point . Scootaloo meets her ideals and in a moment of excitement she lets them have a night of passion with them. Clear cut straight to the point. It was a clear case of infatuated with them got the best of her.
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Well, at least not bad, though. ^.^
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It's never bad lol
Absolutely love it! Cute and fluffy; sweet and sensual. Good job!
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Heh, and those are hard adjectives to earn in a story about a filly getting gang-banged!
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Speaks to the quality! :D
I hope someone commissions a sequel.~ This was great.~
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Thanks! ^.^ What’s your favorite part?
Me too!
You could always ... be the change you want to see in the world...
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We'll see how this month's bills go :P
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My favorite part. I'd say either the moment when someone Points out Scoots gave the wrong birth date for the age she came up with. (honestly I sometimes forget how old I am and have to do that math)
And the scene where Scoots tells her friends she got them invited to to meet the band next time they have a show, and then asked what the hell she did to get them to do that.
Of course I also liked the sex :P It was fun seeing Scoots almost instantly get addicted to the sex
I'd say this is your magnum-opus.
It's actually amazing.
I'm assuming based on the subtext that Star is going to have a serious relationship with Scootaloo but allows the others to join in as well.
Wonder who will take a shine to the other 2?
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Huh ... and here I thought my Opus would be the Sex Ed series or the Precious Little series...